All Comments on '"T" is for Tied Teased Tormented'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Wow

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hot Story!

Loved the moment when her spunk-filled ass is lowered over Chan and she licks it all out. Fucking cock-bursting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Eh it could be better

I don't like the stories where a member of the relationship cheats, like Emma and mr.butt, it should've been kept normal then teased and self pleasured,

Also the second person threw me off at first, dialogue is extremely helpful and a third person pov is better. Like a narrator as opposed to the males perspective from his mind

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I hate stories in the 'you' form. It is so unnatural for a story. It is a form that for some reason or another slipped into modern writing. I advise everybody never to fall into that trap.

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