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Voyeured Daughter

byD. Elbee©
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by Anonymous02/15/06

Good start... no ending

Started out pretty well... but it must have been coffee break time because you took about 2 minutes to write the rest.

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by Anonymous02/15/06

Nice

I really like the way you ended. It would be hard to decide what to do and how much further to take the experience.

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by Anonymous02/15/06

WOW !!!!!

I got hard as a rock reading this and it hasn't gone down .
All I can say is WOW !! I loved your story .

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by Anonymous02/15/06

A man after my own desires

Been there, done that, only in my day it was an open window and an altered blind. I've had to retain the images in my memory, but they're still there. Never got to pork her, but I'd have loved to, in fact I'd still love to..

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by Anonymous02/15/06

Loved it!

My keyboard is all covered with cum! Thanks for writing so good story!

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by Anonymous06/06/06

taboo or not taboo....lol

erm, i liked the story, i liked the way it was written, it seemed abit too far fetched though, and the ending was a bit crappy, but hey, decent masturbation material, well done.

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by Anonymous07/05/06

seen that movie

errup.... I too have been in this situation, but with a daughter's friend.
Unfortunately I am a senator from Mass,
and I went out in search of her ass.
I lucked out and found it,
but fucked up and drowned it.
Was almost the end of my ass!

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by Anonymous07/31/06

If only.....

I loved the way the story started. As a young woman who has fantisys of her father it made my panties quite wet to read this. The ending though was not quite as expressive as the rest though the last sentence sent chills down my spine......

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by Anonymous02/24/07

Been there!

Been in this situation with a friend's dad and I loved every minute...good story...definitely got ME wet, hot, and hella bothered!

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by funnyred04/17/08

not bad

It was good but way too shart. Next time go into a lot more detail. But otherwise very impressive

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