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Haiku River-N-Blue

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by Anonymous

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beautiful...

Just beautiful Blue!
loved the rain drenches serinity stanza!
awesome job as usual!
**HUGS**
~LB~

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by Anonymous02/12/06

smooth and vivid

I like it, don't know about the title. I'd drop the
haiku. Good flow like a river should have, St. John's?
sand s.

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by sack02/12/06

great stuff....

I, too would drop the Haiku from the title, although the sentiments expressed here are often found in haiku.

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by LeBroz02/12/06

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Agreed ~ don't need haiku in the title
To appreciate these poetic snippets.

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by My Erotic Trail02/12/06

blue haiku river

I thouroughly enjoyed this set of haiku poetry, excellent flow from one to the next and the whole I got from the many smaller parts. This was my fav the first one and this one.

rain drenches serenity
twilight Possesses river
we ingest its beauty

great poetry here blue.

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