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beautiful...
Just beautiful Blue!
loved the rain drenches serinity stanza!
awesome job as usual!
**HUGS**
~LB~
smooth and vivid
I like it, don't know about the title. I'd drop the
haiku. Good flow like a river should have, St. John's?
sand s.
great stuff....
I, too would drop the Haiku from the title, although the sentiments expressed here are often found in haiku.
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Agreed ~ don't need haiku in the title
To appreciate these poetic snippets.
blue haiku river
I thouroughly enjoyed this set of haiku poetry, excellent flow from one to the next and the whole I got from the many smaller parts. This was my fav the first one and this one.
rain drenches serenity
twilight Possesses river
we ingest its beauty
great poetry here blue.
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