All Comments on 'Your Story Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Time to get on with it!

Good series of stories but time to bring it to its conclusion - thought this chapter was a little short and feel you as the author is perhaps ready to write something new and are maybe a little frustrated with these characters. I enjoy your writing style though; so please keep writing.One other thing - not sure it really is in the correct category, more of an Erotic Coupling than BDSM.

Kathy

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