All Comments on 'Great One's Touch'

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de_gr over 11 years ago

Nice story

I really liked the part where she meets the old one and the tranformation and how it controls her.

Very imaginative and scary as it should be!

I think that the last part with the boyfriend sex was a bit rushed though.

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