All Comments on 'A Husband's Fantasy Ch. 04'

What a whimp of a husband and bitch of a wife. Eating a pussy is not as degrading and humiliating as eating another man's cum weather it be from the source or his wife's pussy.

I don't know why she dresses in gowns and dresses, she should be dressing in pants because we now see who wears the pants in this household.

Man, grow some gonads and put the pants back on unless this is the lifestyle you want to live. But remember, STD's can be transimited and you are just a suspectible as your so called loving wife.

She get all the cock she wants, so why don't you get all the pussy you want, or do you want any?

Another gay guy writing about loving wives. God is he English. Apologies to most English guys.

He’ll probably remove the negative comments as most do.

Now you are just embarrassing yourself cuckster and most gayly - not just watching now eh wimpy.

You really do have a problem with self respect don't you - you need pathetic humiliation to get by don't you.

You probably should get some help soon and in the interim stay away from any children little sick one.

Talent wasted as without human traits - sorta sad but your choice sicko!!!

Ok, I have been reading Literotica for several years now, and it is always been a place to be completely open. Who are the guys leaving comments on things they dislike? Dan, this is your fantasy, and a rather fun one might I add. For the guys who left the negative comments, why not be critical of the writing styles on literica rather than the dislikes on anothers fantasies. I am sure there is 1 story somewhere on here that everyone objects to. Simple solution, don't read and find another, don't leave negative comments due to ones fantasies.

GREAT STORY DAN!

Keep going! i can't believe the contemptous comments i have read...all these guys are just pathetic idiots who don't understand this site is full of all kind of fantasies: if they don't share them, that's their problem, and they don't need to leave a comment.

Comments are only welcome if they can help the writer to improve his writing.

What about this bullshit of telling the boys it was time to leave. They should have made him leave as soon as he had done his last clean up job, and they all had pissed and shit in his mouth. Any static out of the worthless son of a bitch, and they should have put a chain around his neck and pulled him around the freeway at 70 mph.

He is a worthless son of a bitch anyway and would be better off dead. There is no redeeming quality about this slug of a former human anyway.

were trullllly inspiring to whom I don't know but good shots dannie. Now if you start believing yourself, then the 10 fold escalation factor kicks in causing you to melt down even sooner. This is good dannie boy.

Get the fuzzy slippers, knee pads and pink apron out soon so you can wear them out senselessly while frothing at each end - you are ganna love yourself but have no self respect just as you planned. Gayly and Pathetically self humiliated and loving it.

Well whats next dannie boyo?

Who is in cumtrol of this fuck fest? The bi-sexual wife or the gay wanna be husband? She brings them home and he feeds off her, really! If you don't like whacking off to this kind of fantasy then shut up and move on.

come out, come out. i think its time to stop hiding behind a woman, and be true to yourself. YOU ARE GAY!!

its not the wife fucking other guys that turns you on, its watching the other guys cocks that turns you on.

Forget those who can't handle the excellent story. Keep up the great work.

Dude all I cans ay is that you are a fool If I were married I sure as hell would not let my wife be with another man, Nor would I let her or anyone treat me in that way and I sure as hell would not suck another guys dick or let tem suck mine let alone fuck me in the ass , you have some seriouse issues and need profesional help. That is not a loving marriage it is a farce if you like cock so my maybe you should get a sex change and she should turn tricks.

I'm not leaving a negative comment, I'm leaving a positive on. I'm POSITIVE the author is gay, I'm positive he's in competition for strange dick with the "wife," and I'm positive it's only a matter of time till he moves to san francisco and becomes someones' bitch. I could care less what the author does, except I'd rather the author posted stories in the gay category instead of here.

i looked at the title and glanced at the last chapter. i wanted to see words that he awoke from the nightmare and the whore wife was gone. not here and not now

Well done Dan. You had the guts to write about your fantasy, and it was a pretty good read..I am sick to death of the plain vanilla stuff (the stuff that morons who leave the negative comments love), typically a man gets hot for his wife that dresses up ??? ... what is that shit???? To imagine a full raft of experiences as you have, takes some imagination and a a lot of guts to put yourself out there. I notice you seem to prefer writing in the first person (is it less of a challenge), why not try writing in the third person as an alternative (perhaps like a commentator etc). The sky is the limit for your imaginative and creative output. I just wish Literotica would filter out the stupid fucking pricks, who winge all the fucking time, "I didnt like this", or the one that realy hurts, from a person with the mind the size of a sparrows cock, "You're Gay" (always without the punctuation). Well losers, FUCK OFF from here, this place is ours, why dont you log onto somewhere like disneydotcom. Dan, thanks for writing this for me to enjoy, and keep going, try to explore cum sucking, forced fem, cuckolding, and every other form of sexual creativity you can

Dan, I envy you your life style. I would encourage you to stop fucking your wife at all. You cannot possibly compete with big beautiful black dicks. Ther is nothing more rewarding than offering your wife to the black masters. If they are kind enough to fuck you ar at least piss on you, you are the luckiest man on the planet.

I know some people claim they love this lifestyle but let me tell you from experience...when the wifey says you can't fuck her anymore, that her pussy belongs to (pick a name) you may as well start emptying the bank account, changing the insurance beneficiaries, getting the cars in your name, and finding a apartment somewhere plus a hundred other things to complete the separation because let me tell you straight up...ITS OVER. No loving wife would ever treat her husband the way these bitches do in these stories. Even in this story where supposedly the husband initiated the situation we find out the wife has been fucking the repairman for four months before she even pretended to "go along" with the hubbies "perversions". I can understand how some guys may want to share their wifes body but , and this is guaranteed, none of them want to share her heart. Thats the lesson these selfish cunts can't seem to learn. When you take on other lovers for sex, keep it sex only, and always remember your number one man, good ole hubby. If you can't manage that then at least be decent enough to file for divorce and go hunting for all the big cocks you want. For you guys who want to hang around kidding yourself that your wife still loves you while shes shitting on you every day, well...you deserve it. btw, shame on the author for alluding to a continuation and then not delivering. Just so there is no confusion...I don't object to the story...as cuckold stories go this was pretty standard...not bad...not good...just OK. I just had a couple of things I wanted to get off my chest. I know this is all just fiction but some folks think it is real...read the comments...so I thought a little realism was appropriate.

I liked your story, but the part of the husband licking another guys asshole or eating his cum (whether he is white or black) is not normal. What I like is well hung guys fucking my wife (again white and black) because believe it or not there are white guys with equally big cocks. It is just more exciting to see a black cock disappear into a white pussy. My wife too enjoys being filled by a black man's sperm because of the taboo aspect. Interracial sex is great and everybody should enjoy it

Regardless of what some people leaving comments say these are great stories and I sometimes think when I read the negative shit they write that they wish they were in the same situation. My wife was well aware that I am bi and sucked and got fucked by men long before we were married and that I get turned on watching her fuck other men or women. I have been having sex with men and women since I was 14 when I began fucking my sister and sucking off my uncles. I consider myself a cum slut and will take it where ever I can find it. Since I enjoy sucking cocks and doing pussies as does my wife I find it the best sex life possible. Try it, you might like it!

I wish there was a Nasty Bitch area because this could go there.

But this is a gay story, post there.

What a great story, makes me want to cut my nuts off, shave my ass and move to fagland. I won't rest till I can shove two cucumbers and the golden gate bridge up my ass....sideways! And I'll have it set up in my will that when I die, I want my cremated ashes put in one of those fleshlights so I can continue to suck cock long after I'm gone. Uh oh...sorry, forgot there for a second, none of that shit will be happening because I'M A MAN, men don't suck cock, men don't cheating sluts, and no man takes it up the ass. I understand some males may do it, but they aren't men...yes, there's a distinction. Kudos to the author for coming up with one truly fucked up scenario of a story, the only way you could make this worse is if you included child molestation...and I'd not be surprised to see that in a future chapter!

YOUR HOLE STORY IS AVERY SICK STORY I NOT THAT THE WIFE IS FUCKING EVERY DOMB SHIT IN TOWN BUT SHEIS THE BIGGEST SKANK IN THE TOWN IF THAT IS HIS FANTASY FUCK HIM TO I HOPE THEY DIE THE MUST DEATH THERE IS REAL SKANKS.....................................................................................

The bell has tolled on this story. The natural progression would suggest some BDSM ,Water Sports,or something different than the same ol' fuck all her holes. Plus Wimpy the husband just can't be taken seriously. ~ It's time to add one more short chapter where Katie steps off a curb,gets hit by a speeding bus,and STDs fly into the air,and are taken by the wind to fall like rain all over the town.

can it get any more boring????

I believe this is what gets termed, "lame".

Why not change the direction by bringing in a stronger personality she falls in love with and leave her sissy on the outside looking in or even worse?