All Comments on 'Pickle In My Pocket'

by sandspike

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 18 years ago
Vlasic?

Cute poem. Love the lines about I got some greens in my pocket and Beach Boys playing in Kokomo

bluerainsbluerainsabout 18 years ago
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*mentioned on today's review*

a few years back the Landsharks were very active around my area...they are so...timeless just like the beach boys...I think we are getting pickled with age...sigh...blue

Maria2394Maria2394about 18 years ago
i like pickles

and your poetry:) thanks for making me smile

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Ah!

The double entendre at it's best. Making a note to try these as pick-up lines. Food talk is sexy. Nice poem, SS.

Tess

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Or perhaps a Vegan

Will dance to a different beat

Once she samples your pickle...

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