All Comments on 'As Time Goes On'

by Jack Gates

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
nice write

promises of tomorrow in poetic form, thanks for the read.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

You can only hope these promises ring true,

Unlike most promises of this nature that men make.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
faithful

A way of consoling ~ offering reassurance.

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