by Desperado X
I like your style. Similar to my own. I have always been a fan of vampires and I thought this was excellent. I hope there is more of it.
Keep up the good work
I absolutely loved this story. Please write more about Jack. Please don't make me beg. I thought it was excellent.
You really should write more! There really arent enough well written vampire stories on here to satisfy me...but yours did!