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by Belegon

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impressiveimpressiveabout 18 years ago
Yum!

And silk noose? So many places to go with that metaphor.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Belegon,

This is a good Bad Memory. I like the similes throughout—very fresh and imaginative.

gotwood49gotwood49about 18 years ago
very good poem!

Nice imagery, Bel...I could almost see your furrowed brow as you wrote these lines, and sense your frustration. Nicely done!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Bad memories are washed away but

A bad memory cannot be repaired...

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
secure

Through good times or bad times ~ I remain secure within the boundaries of your sweet love.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WHY DIDNT HE TELL ME HE WAS MARRIED

his answer. I FORGOT. TK U MLJ LV NV

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