All Comments on 'The Pace of Life's Race'

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
rat race

I saw those guys racing each other in the alley of a city street the other day <grin...nice poem

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 18 years ago
this part.......

Blurring the faces

As we bump brief cases

Up and down packed staircases

Rushing in an out of work spaces

i really like very much. overall very nice.....don

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Indeed, leave the Rat Races for as long as you can and smell those roses.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice...for a pre-schooler!

Wow...you rhyme words good! GROW UP

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