by MissTe
I'm impressed, the first story had my complete and utter attention. Its about time we got some Space Opera porn worth reading.
lots of new ideas, but you must read what you write. I am sure you did a spell check, but you used "potty" instead of "putty" and all I could do after that was giggle. Just an observance, liked it and am looking forward to future chapters.
That is a rather embarassing typo that slipped past my proofreading too! Submitted an edited version along with chapter 2, hope you enjoy it and thanks for the feedback :)
Really enjoyed your previous stories. This one is creative- hopefully will be as good as the others. Love the Lezzie anals and group sex!
Gret job! Can't wait for more!
Gret job! Can't wait for more!
I think you should send your stories to video companies and then they could be made into porn movies, I would really enjoy the visual of this story.
Wow, this is so sexy. Someone plz make this into a movie
Wow, this is so sexy. Someone plz make this into a movie
The little spacegirl has to stay in a alien ship for a whole year being a sex slave, really hurts my feelings. NOT!!