All Comments on 'Spacegirl Lisa Ch. 01'

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Sean RenaudSean Renaudabout 18 years ago
A Space Odditty: 6969

I'm impressed, the first story had my complete and utter attention. Its about time we got some Space Opera porn worth reading.

wyzrchkwyzrchkabout 18 years ago
Great little story

lots of new ideas, but you must read what you write. I am sure you did a spell check, but you used "potty" instead of "putty" and all I could do after that was giggle. Just an observance, liked it and am looking forward to future chapters.

MissTeMissTeabout 18 years agoAuthor
Oops!

That is a rather embarassing typo that slipped past my proofreading too! Submitted an edited version along with chapter 2, hope you enjoy it and thanks for the feedback :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Latest

Really enjoyed your previous stories. This one is creative- hopefully will be as good as the others. Love the Lezzie anals and group sex!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 18 years ago
Fun And interesting story--arousing too!

Gret job! Can't wait for more!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 18 years ago
Fun And interesting story--arousing too!

Gret job! Can't wait for more!

littlerob162littlerob162over 15 years ago
made into a movie

I think you should send your stories to video companies and then they could be made into porn movies, I would really enjoy the visual of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Hot stuff, hot topic

Wow, this is so sexy. Someone plz make this into a movie

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Hot stuff, hot topic

Wow, this is so sexy. Someone plz make this into a movie

GRUMPY1962GRUMPY1962about 5 years ago
POOR LISA

The little spacegirl has to stay in a alien ship for a whole year being a sex slave, really hurts my feelings. NOT!!

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