All Comments on 'First Time Quickie'

Nice story. Good buildup. But the sex needed a bit more detail.

It kinda makes sense that guys can't give cunnilingus as well as women, seeing as men don't have the same equipment. But women could help neutralize the disadvantage by being more willing to TEACH instead of relying on men to "just know how". And, I admit, some men need to be more willing to learn as well.

I liked it it was very stimulating if you get my drift well thats all I have to say keep up the good work p.s. i was just thinking that you could put more pussy eating into your store for me because this one didnt get me as wet as the others.

I'm sure you didn't see her again ... you have a bad attitude towards the size of women.

How could you change the subject so abruptly to something that would turn the reader off?

Stupid move.

It was indeed a quickie. Heated up fast, was there, then gone. I liked it until it made a derogitory comment about fat people. That blows

I was so into this story until the Fatphobia; then I was completely turned off. Bigotry is super Hetero