All Comments on 'Assorted Grills'

People who spell English correctly lack creativity... they're probablly repressed as well. However, there were a couple of places where I noticed spelling problems. Now, if I noticed I'm sure others did as well. My spelling and grammar make me sound like an illiterate South American... I'm a South American but I'm not illiterate! I'ms just spelling and grammar challenged in several different languages.

Having said that, I loved the images and the idea. This is very clever writing. I hope to see more soon. I do recommend that you begin looking for help from one of the free editors here. I can't tell you how helpful they are.

Creative and interesting - surrealist erotica. Love it!

a very interesting story line.

$300 for both awesome anal sex and a large grill? What store is this? Where is it? I wanna join! This story rocked, Man. It had everything: I am in awe of your writing ability and your sexual creativity, dude! Keep writing, please. I love everything that I've read of yours so far.