All Comments on 'Unfolding Ch. 01'

Or is it just this story?

Very nice.

...Not unlike a generously lubed asshole. Great job, Selena. That's a very erotic story you've got there. Next time I'm going to have to read it over with your actual voice.

This is the best thing I have read in a LONG time.

It is refreshing to read something that dwells on the erotic, rather than length, cup size, or degradation.

If you write more, I will read it.

a very romantic and erotic story. thanks

Only wish my wife would let me get into her arse like this I am sure she would enjoy it.

Nicely written. Please write more like this.

Many thanks

took advantage of a rare opportunity of an empty houdse to try your audio.

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM good

Once again, the sheer quality of your writing and your skills as a narrator transcend the fact that this story fits a category I'd normally have little interest in. Hope you can find time to upgrade the subsequent instalments from "anal" to "with audio".

I hardly know what to say....

How to praise it? Well maybe to say when I listened I wished "I" was your husband. He's a lucky man.

I loved your story. You truly "opened up" for your husband and your listeners.

Selena,

Nothing I can say in words........speechless.......if those are your words...........*quivers at thought of your actions*

Keep writting and recording, your new #1 in Canada is waiting for more works from you.

Exemplary,

Sam

loved every minute of it keep keeping me up your great.

Listening to this I fondly recalled the first time I fucked a woman in the ass. Her name was Tammy..she loved it in the ass!.I was able to get all my cock in her,then I slowly fucked her. Her ass felt so good. When I came in her,it was the best feeling of my life. I love ass fucking! My wife now lets me fuck her in the ass..she loves it too!

That was amazing, that is all I can say, amazing

Like the title says, absolutely amazing. I love your voice, especially because of the fact you don't moan, gasp and breath in your audio... it's so irritating when women do that in their recordings, it just sounds terrible.

Anyways... I loved it oh so much... And I don't know that I can find anything to match it, especially since I am obsessed with anal. And your word choice is fantastic... Everything just fantastic. 10/10, 100% great A++

:D

Your story is the most honest and realistic description of first time anal that I have read.

Well done! But then you are one of the better writers on here.

Your story is the most honest and realistic description of first time anal that I have read.

Well done! But then you are one of the better writers on here.

A fantastic story, beautifully written and beautifully read. You write brilliantly and you have to be one of the best writers I have ever come across online. Ever considered getting published?

hubby and i just got done listing to this we are so horny i am going to bed and get ready to get fucked in the ass tonite keep up the great stories

Beautifully told by the master!

I resisted the first time, but once I got started I realized how much I loved it. Now I ask for it

you're sweet voice.

LOVE LOVE LOVE.. Mmmm..

Your wonderful writing is enhanced by your beautifully expressive voice.

That naughty guy you call Jack is my hero. I closed my eyes and listened to you tell your story and understood so many things about my fetish to fuck a curvy red head like you. What better way for two lovers to experience ones desire of pensive and passion and the erotic feeling of getting your ass fucked by the one you trust.

a sexy steamy story. Well written and well paced. I will think about this in the shower today....

As a lover of anal sex, I loved your story and recording....an amazing voice you have. I have not read or heard the others in the series...but I cant wait to do so. Thanks for sharing with us

I very much enjoyed the way you created the feeling of anticipation and your description of the first entry. You brought me back to my first time; though my experience was a bit more laborious. Perhaps I will write about it one day.

Thank you for writing it.

Was so horny after that love it

Wished you recorded the whole story. Best audio.

Excellent work. You are an exceptional talent it the art of erotic audio.

Didn't even get to the Audio this go around because I was so engrossed reading your description. Reminded me of the build up to my first time.

Thank you!

Reminds me of when I was younger, and what I'm missing! Wonderful audio

You should read the whole series. Thank you for sharing

A beautifully written & read tale of imtamate sexual exploration, I enyoyed it very much, to the point of fantasizing about it happening to me.

Please give us parts 2,3 & so on as quickly as possible..

I am a 19-year-old woman, and my boyfriend fucks me anally about four or five times each week. I believe that anal sex completes me. Our relationship is based on trust, respect, devotion, and sacrifice. I always trust him with my body, ceding control of my pleasure and pain. I respect his judgment to figure out my pain boundaries and to keep pushing the envelope to discover and slightly exceed my limits. My devotion to his satisfaction and pleasure will stop at nothing. I am willing to sacrifice my body and to endure severe pain, including deep anal fucking for more than an hour, if there is a chance that it might give him more pleasure or maximize his satisfaction.

Just beautiful, thanks x

I want to fuck my wife in the ass but she has never let me so I keep fantasizing about it!

That was incredible.

Extremely realistic.

This story is great. It so perfectly depicts the intimacy of a marriage and at the same time the trust and heat that builds over time. Reminded me of my wife and I in the morning in bed. And so Hot too. Thank you

I enjoyed it A LOT <3

This is like nothing else on the web. The hottest, most intimate thing I've ever heard. Thank you.

At work listening to this story by you makes me feel super horny now!!

Great Job. I loved it. So well done. Very Hot. Yum

Wonderful commentary of your first anal experience. You took it slowly but completely. Sounded so real....

FANTASTIC!!!! I Loved this story!!!!!

I get so tired of anal scenes on Lit where a guy with a 9 Inch horse cock as thick as the first-timer woman's bicep just lines up and pushes it in to the hilt, and it kinda hurts but she quickly loves it... it don't work that way, folks. Your slow, gradual buildup was deliciously erotic.

You are probably the best narrator on Lit... I agree with the others here, the rest of this series needs to be graced by your sensual voice.

Oh my word "mmmmm"

Very nice, awesome narrative and a beautiful voice.

You write so beautifully, capturing the emotional struggle as well as the sensual exploration. There is genuine recognition of the halting uncertainty involved in partners pushing one another's boundaries, an honest unfolding. Thank you.

You sound amazing honey! I love your voice and your moans. I could almost feel your tight anus gripping my cock while i masturbated to you. Thank you😘

Thank you for recording it. Your voice is just perfect. So so so erotic and intimate.