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Unfolding Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by bobocity03/13/06

Is it hot in here?

Or is it just this story?

Very nice.

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by Aurora Black03/13/06

Slick and Hot...

...Not unlike a generously lubed asshole. Great job, Selena. That's a very erotic story you've got there. Next time I'm going to have to read it over with your actual voice.

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by Anonymous03/13/06

WOW!

This is the best thing I have read in a LONG time.
It is refreshing to read something that dwells on the erotic, rather than length, cup size, or degradation.
If you write more, I will read it.

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by Anonymous03/13/06

erotic, but also sensual

a very romantic and erotic story. thanks

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by Anonymous04/27/06

Erotic

Only wish my wife would let me get into her arse like this I am sure she would enjoy it.
Nicely written. Please write more like this.
Many thanks

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by sirhugs07/08/06

Even better with your voice

took advantage of a rare opportunity of an empty houdse to try your audio.

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMM good

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by Erotonaut07/24/06

Hot!

Once again, the sheer quality of your writing and your skills as a narrator transcend the fact that this story fits a category I'd normally have little interest in. Hope you can find time to upgrade the subsequent instalments from "anal" to "with audio".

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by maddoug08/03/06

Awesome

I hardly know what to say....

How to praise it? Well maybe to say when I listened I wished "I" was your husband. He's a lucky man.

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by Anonymous08/08/06

A beautiful story.

I loved your story. You truly "opened up" for your husband and your listeners.

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by coolwatersam08/16/06

Actions and words.......

Selena,

Nothing I can say in words........speechless.......if those are your words...........*quivers at thought of your actions*

Keep writting and recording, your new #1 in Canada is waiting for more works from you.

Exemplary,
Sam

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by Anonymous11/22/06

Gooooooood

loved every minute of it keep keeping me up your great.

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by Anonymous02/16/07

My first time

Listening to this I fondly recalled the first time I fucked a woman in the ass. Her name was Tammy..she loved it in the ass!.I was able to get all my cock in her,then I slowly fucked her. Her ass felt so good. When I came in her,it was the best feeling of my life. I love ass fucking! My wife now lets me fuck her in the ass..she loves it too!

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by keithtopia102/06/08

Fantastic

That was amazing, that is all I can say, amazing

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by Anonymous07/21/08

Absolutely amazing

Like the title says, absolutely amazing. I love your voice, especially because of the fact you don't moan, gasp and breath in your audio... it's so irritating when women do that in their recordings, it just sounds terrible.

Anyways... I loved it oh so much... And I don't know that I can find anything to match it, especially since I am obsessed with anal. And your word choice is fantastic... Everything just fantastic. 10/10, 100% great A++

:D

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by Anonymous02/05/09

amazing

Your story is the most honest and realistic description of first time anal that I have read.
Well done! But then you are one of the better writers on here.

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by Anonymous02/05/09

amazing

Your story is the most honest and realistic description of first time anal that I have read.
Well done! But then you are one of the better writers on here.

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by Anonymous04/14/09

Wonderful

A fantastic story, beautifully written and beautifully read. You write brilliantly and you have to be one of the best writers I have ever come across online. Ever considered getting published?

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by Anonymous04/18/09

hot

hubby and i just got done listing to this we are so horny i am going to bed and get ready to get fucked in the ass tonite keep up the great stories

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by OleTroubador07/09/09

Beautiful!

Beautifully told by the master!

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by Anonymous08/17/09

Sweet anal sex

I resisted the first time, but once I got started I realized how much I loved it. Now I ask for it

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by caryhyp02/05/10

you're sweet voice.

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by Cleardiamond01/23/11

LOVE LOVE LOVE.. Mmmm..

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by Peter_Abelard06/07/11

Wonderful wrting!

Your wonderful writing is enhanced by your beautifully expressive voice.

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by hotbutterfly08/11/11

Then let me just stroke against your ass

That naughty guy you call Jack is my hero. I closed my eyes and listened to you tell your story and understood so many things about my fetish to fuck a curvy red head like you. What better way for two lovers to experience ones desire of pensive and passion and the erotic feeling of getting your ass fucked by the one you trust.

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by Annie_O12/19/12

steamy

a sexy steamy story. Well written and well paced. I will think about this in the shower today....

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by cf2343002/06/13

WOW

As a lover of anal sex, I loved your story and recording....an amazing voice you have. I have not read or heard the others in the series...but I cant wait to do so. Thanks for sharing with us

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by collaredkelly05/24/13

Enjoyed the build-up

I very much enjoyed the way you created the feeling of anticipation and your description of the first entry. You brought me back to my first time; though my experience was a bit more laborious. Perhaps I will write about it one day.

Thank you for writing it.

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by Ineedadirtywoman03/28/14

OMG!

What a storyteller.

I was right there with them.

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