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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/10/06

power

impact...hits one with goose bumps...moving images made contact with verse..nicely done/blue

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by RhymeFairy03/10/06

Awww

No shame in feelings, love or want.
Go with it, awesome pen here ~

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by 03/12/06

Good stuff

Text and art meld nicely in this. The pain is felt all the way over here.

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by duddle14612/25/06

lovely.

Words and illustration well integrated. Magical words ~ poignant and delicate - make this rendering meaningful.

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by LeBroz02/04/07

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Well, with that it'll take more than a little bandage to fix the hurt.

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by LeBroz02/04/07

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Well, with that it'll take more than a little bandage to fix the hurt.

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by LeBroz05/25/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,500 poems.



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by WickedEve10/16/08

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I love the overall look of this piece.

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by tazz31701/23/12

SOMTHING EACH PRESIDENT

subscribes. TK U MLJ LV NV

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