with a ferocious velocity. Ever considered audio submissions? You've certainly got the text for it.
your poem was good. i could feel what you were feeling, and as a reader, a Dominant reader, that was a gift of an experience ive never felt.
i think that your content could be focused more to communicate the desire to be taken, owned, forced...to be made utterly DESPERATE. more organization of the stanzas into mini-stories. you began to do this, but it fell apart halfway through. you have a gift of communicating and i cant wait to read more!
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A wonderful list of things that every man wants to hear but not every man is willing to admit. Wonderful work.
A very honest poem. But as usual the blokes don't get it do they? A truer expression of love i have never heard.
I'm actually left pretty speechless. All I can say is I wish I were still in college so I could transfer to Auburn right away!
WOW... ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!
This and your later Make Me Say More are more than a cut above the poetry usually found on this site. Congratulations--and give us more ,please
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