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Make me say "Please"

bySykoSara©
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by Anonymous

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by 03/17/06

Raw stream of abandonment

with a ferocious velocity. Ever considered audio submissions? You've certainly got the text for it.

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by Anonymous03/20/06

desperation

your poem was good. i could feel what you were feeling, and as a reader, a Dominant reader, that was a gift of an experience ive never felt.

i think that your content could be focused more to communicate the desire to be taken, owned, forced...to be made utterly DESPERATE. more organization of the stanzas into mini-stories. you began to do this, but it fell apart halfway through. you have a gift of communicating and i cant wait to read more!


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jason30904

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by Lee Chambers08/20/06

Beautiful

A wonderful list of things that every man wants to hear but not every man is willing to admit. Wonderful work.

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by Anonymous12/09/06

They do not understand do they?

A very honest poem. But as usual the blokes don't get it do they? A truer expression of love i have never heard.


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by EdibleEgg04/23/07

Loved it!

I'm actually left pretty speechless. All I can say is I wish I were still in college so I could transfer to Auburn right away!

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by Anonymous07/01/07

so hot!

WOW... ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!

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by Anonymous02/23/08

Wonderfully Erotic

This and your later Make Me Say More are more than a cut above the poetry usually found on this site. Congratulations--and give us more ,please

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