by the Troubador
It has been far too long since we were last able to read some new work from you! I'm looking forward to following this story.
So glad to see a story by the Troubador - it's like finding a gift under the tree. I anxiously await more chapters to come.
Its always good to see a story on here from you. This one is starting out as most of your stories do, it is a winner. A fan always. Ricky
You have an interesting start, a really remarkable woman. Of course, if you're gonna put these two together you'll have to kill off hubby, one way or another.
We can't have open adultry, Troub.
Look forward to more of this story.
Troubador:
It's a pleasure to read a new story of yours. Your work has always been tops in my book and this one looks like it's going to rank up with the best. Thank You. Ronnie W.
One thing I have found in my time here, and that is The Troubador can always be relied on for a quality story. Your work has inspired me in the past...and will into the future too. Thank you.
Your description of the women is an exact description of the one true love of my sad sad love life. She was also married beneath are herself. This is the third time I'm reading your story. It's like a page out of my life.
It's a great read.
Thanks again,
Joe Zappa III
What a disappointing effort. A non-story with a non-ending and no character development. A waste of 10 minutes. One star. I'm generous to a fault.
What an extraordinarily good first chapter. The main characters have been effortlessly introduced, along with enough background to let us know enough about them to be interested. I can hardly wait to see how this goes.
Of course all is not perfect, as there is a bit of confusion about “complement” and compliment” but that’s a minor quibble. Overall a wonderful start!