All Comments on 'Mein Liebling'

by SEVERUSMAX

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amasterfoundamasterfoundabout 18 years ago
Loved it.

Master,

I loved the poem you wrote for me. As you know YOU will always have my heart, something NO ONE else will ever have. I do not require for you to be exclusive with me, JUST as long as I have your heart.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Better

This could be. It has potentionl. A good "poem" edit would do wonders.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
nice write~

this has a feel to it that I absorbed <grin

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