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98' Eyes Can Tell

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz12/08/06

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Another piece with issues of plurals, possessives, & contractions;
Seems to have improved in later years.

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by duddle14612/11/06

inter-soul

Under control ~ except for the eyes. When it comes to understanding - only the eyes have it ~ and betray.

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