by rydia57
The only thing, and I do mean the only thing, wrong with this story was that it cut in and out too much. Other than that....damned hot! The ending was phenominal!
A little choppy but I'm hoping the prince finds MY cottage tonight. And they lived happily ever after !!
"Alleged" third person writing does not do justice to an otherwise erotic story. Children's story-book telling is not for adult stories.
Rydia, you took me to a place that was very hot. I felt like we were talking on the phone and you produced a scenario that was vivid and erotic. It seemed that we were getting off together. Thank you for a great bedtime story!
Wow Rydia, Best bedtime story I have heard in a while! Thank you : ) You have such a sexy voice, anything you do is a major turn on for me. Keep posting!
The story was very hot; your voice is very sensuous.
If I'm not mistaken... wasn't that some music from Final Fantasy VII in the background?
I must say I lost sleep over this 'bedtime story' haha. Thanks again, and will be looking for your next post. Your voice is so sexy, all you have to do is open it and I want to melt. : ) Very hot, Ryd.
jp
Loved the third party bedtime story format!! Exteremely erotic and original. You know how to get my blood flowin'!
gosh it was great!!! especially your voice made me cumm ummmm - i wish i was with you - the story was fabulous - keep it goin...
That was really good. Little movements, rustling sounds, the humming of something other than FF7 in the back ground. Hot damn. I'm gonna get a hard-on, Every time I replay Midgar, now.
On a one to five you get a ten from me. Damn!
It wasn't just that you got me off, you sounded as if you got your nut as well. Love ya babe.
I enjoyed this MANY times over... oh please do another, that was tasty to listen to... ;)
Loved that story.
As did I love the music lol
FF7 is kick-ass.
And I thought it went well with the story.
Can't wait for your next post.
Hey baby,
With a story and a delivery like that, I wish I had you alone for one night. Like women too? I can strap one on and do you good.
PinkPinkAndHot
I loved it alot. And with Midgar in the background as long as a very audible vibrator, what better story could we listen to? And with the fact that you came very hard in the end, ahhh. Thank you very much.
LordAidenWolf
If had asked if you cum doing your audio reading it very quite apparent that you do, vibrator and all! EXCELLENT EROTIC AUDIO STORY TELLING & MORE....
Wow, I thought that I'd come sooner than I did; had to control myself. But your voice and music and vibrator; WOW. Pls keep up the great work :)
Later
Ponderously it was both arousing and dream like! <P>
And now let's hear how Cinderella, I mean - the fair maiden, has tucked to bed seven cranky midgets...
I'll be your Dark Prince anytime.
A sleep or awake what a great dream.......
I have a feeling I am going to be dreaming of what you did to the dark prince for a long time tonight. My god girl you can cum. For me, for your audience, anytime. Keep the stories coming. Must hear more...
Kiwi
Full of passion and desire - breathtaking. The dark Prince was indeed lucky to find you.
As soon as the music hit, I was instantly reminded of Aerith and had to turn it off. Thanks...
Comment on the music: heroes of might and magic 2...on of the most entertaing games I ever played...
Comment on the story: best bed time story ever...
That was great, except I just could get past the Final Fantasy 7 music playing in the background. Kinda...threw me off.
Great story just what I need after a restless day. Thank you
Not really getting all the rave reviews, I realize most stories are 'read' but the good ones don't sound like they are. Sorry but served its purpose as a bedtime story, put me right to sleep
This story created so many red hot pics in my mind. It all got too much to cope with and I came as you did. Hearing you gasping "Cum for me - CUM for me" sent me over the top. Thank you