All Comments on 'Bedtime Story'

by rydia57

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Could have been a 5

The only thing, and I do mean the only thing, wrong with this story was that it cut in and out too much. Other than that....damned hot! The ending was phenominal!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Once Upon a TIme ....

A little choppy but I'm hoping the prince finds MY cottage tonight. And they lived happily ever after !!

don87654don87654about 18 years ago
Disgusting in an attempt to read....

"Alleged" third person writing does not do justice to an otherwise erotic story. Children's story-book telling is not for adult stories.

robberbaronswordrobberbaronswordabout 18 years ago
Well Done!

Rydia, you took me to a place that was very hot. I felt like we were talking on the phone and you produced a scenario that was vivid and erotic. It seemed that we were getting off together. Thank you for a great bedtime story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
One of your best!!!!

Wow Rydia, Best bedtime story I have heard in a while! Thank you : ) You have such a sexy voice, anything you do is a major turn on for me. Keep posting!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
FF7?

The story was very hot; your voice is very sensuous.

If I'm not mistaken... wasn't that some music from Final Fantasy VII in the background?

lrpoboylrpoboyabout 18 years ago
Wow Rydia....

I must say I lost sleep over this 'bedtime story' haha. Thanks again, and will be looking for your next post. Your voice is so sexy, all you have to do is open it and I want to melt. : ) Very hot, Ryd.

jp

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Amazing!!!

Loved the third party bedtime story format!! Exteremely erotic and original. You know how to get my blood flowin'!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
its one of the best erotic story

gosh it was great!!! especially your voice made me cumm ummmm - i wish i was with you - the story was fabulous - keep it goin...

chronicle_tenkochronicle_tenkoabout 18 years ago
Oh wow. Ah Damn.

That was really good. Little movements, rustling sounds, the humming of something other than FF7 in the back ground. Hot damn. I'm gonna get a hard-on, Every time I replay Midgar, now.

GothLordGothLordover 17 years ago
!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh Holy damn!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent story...sexy voice...

Superb....Nothing more to say...;)

mjl2010mjl2010about 17 years ago
Where's the rest of these she did?

On a one to five you get a ten from me. Damn!

denniscleedenniscleeabout 17 years ago
Did you cum too??? gooooooood!!

It wasn't just that you got me off, you sounded as if you got your nut as well. Love ya babe.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Mmm tasty

I enjoyed this MANY times over... oh please do another, that was tasty to listen to... ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
God damn!

Loved that story.

As did I love the music lol

FF7 is kick-ass.

And I thought it went well with the story.

Can't wait for your next post.

PinkPinkAndHotPinkPinkAndHotover 16 years ago
Hot, Baby. You were really getting off......

Hey baby,

With a story and a delivery like that, I wish I had you alone for one night. Like women too? I can strap one on and do you good.

PinkPinkAndHot

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
HA! Best use of Midgar Theme ever

I loved it alot. And with Midgar in the background as long as a very audible vibrator, what better story could we listen to? And with the fact that you came very hard in the end, ahhh. Thank you very much.

LordAidenWolf

PurpleMasterPurpleMasterover 16 years ago
Helluva Bedtime Story!!!

If had asked if you cum doing your audio reading it very quite apparent that you do, vibrator and all! EXCELLENT EROTIC AUDIO STORY TELLING & MORE....

CorinthlvrCorinthlvrabout 16 years ago
Awesome; WOW!!

Wow, I thought that I'd come sooner than I did; had to control myself. But your voice and music and vibrator; WOW. Pls keep up the great work :)

Later

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
Arousing and dream like at the same time!

Ponderously it was both arousing and dream like! <P>

And now let's hear how Cinderella, I mean - the fair maiden, has tucked to bed seven cranky midgets...

highlander72wvhighlander72wvalmost 16 years ago
The best bedtime story

I'll be your Dark Prince anytime.

A sleep or awake what a great dream.......

lowflykiwilowflykiwialmost 16 years ago
Not sleeping tonight

I have a feeling I am going to be dreaming of what you did to the dark prince for a long time tonight. My god girl you can cum. For me, for your audience, anytime. Keep the stories coming. Must hear more...

Kiwi

water_sidewater_sideover 15 years ago
Brought me to my knees!

Full of passion and desire - breathtaking. The dark Prince was indeed lucky to find you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Final Fantasy VII...for fuck sake.

As soon as the music hit, I was instantly reminded of Aerith and had to turn it off. Thanks...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
awesome

Comment on the music: heroes of might and magic 2...on of the most entertaing games I ever played...

Comment on the story: best bed time story ever...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Music

That was great, except I just could get past the Final Fantasy 7 music playing in the background. Kinda...threw me off.

bigd2k622bigd2k622almost 14 years ago
made my night

Great story just what I need after a restless day. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
easy crowd

Not really getting all the rave reviews, I realize most stories are 'read' but the good ones don't sound like they are. Sorry but served its purpose as a bedtime story, put me right to sleep

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Aeris theme in the back round, really, pulled me right out

Read above

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I loved this!

This story created so many red hot pics in my mind. It all got too much to cope with and I came as you did. Hearing you gasping "Cum for me - CUM for me" sent me over the top. Thank you

Zeppelin1Zeppelin1over 9 years ago
She is the best!

She is the best!

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