All Comments on 'Chance: A Day in May Ch. 09'

Duncan’s still there to entice and cause mixed feelings. She's doesn't have to think about her marriage with Duncan and she going on safari.

Troubador;

Also a nice set-up for the next chapter. Carry on. Thank You. Ronnie W.

love people stories also...thanks for the great insight and setup for the next chapter, although sex is great but this story is a standalone with sex at this time...love where this is goingand look for forward to reading on. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Duncan's not what he seems. Over-praising Helen, seemingly neutrally demonzing her husband Gerry ("the agency I used is highly professional; they will never tell me or you any thing not true", ad nauseam), seemingly overly protective of her feelings and physical well being, while "patiently" waiting for her to give herself "voluntarily",,,, No honourable man, or woman, for that matter, would behave like this leech Duncan, who, so far, the autor, has been presented as the demsil in distress's knight in shiny armour,,,

This guy makes me wanna puke.

0This IS the mostly faceless "guy" who's always fucking all these lame, mud-for-brain "loving wives", who, after too late, found that their seemingly guilty husbands (many of them at least) were in fact not guilty at all.

Prediction?: Helen, too, will eventually, after she's been fucked silly, metaphorically and literally, wake up to understand that Duncan's seemingly highly honourable intentions were first class charade,,, by then of course the damages would have been done. Just don't give her, Mr. Troubador, LAME lines, elephant tears, etc. in fake attempts to beg forgiveness from her now-seemingly-guilty husband, Gerry, who's supposedly having international rendevouz with, who is it now?, his secretary? lol