All Comments on 'Mercury Mood'

by Wanton Vixxxen

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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A morning dose of the Vixxx's thrill

And I can tell the Doctor never will

Find the cause or the cure of fornication flu;

He will poke, he will probe

All for naught

As this flu demands repeated treatments

In his 'ICU'

Don't get well soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
all the doctors

I ever see either old or can't speak much english...overcharge me and scoot me out ...must be that leather and lace you hide...smiles...awesome pen...as always...blue

EmJ0385EmJ0385about 18 years ago
Such a treat!

just headed out the door but happened to see this as today's first verse of the day. Never knew being sick cud be so much fun! Time to go---and maybe I can find my own doc for some at home care!

PatHous56PatHous56about 18 years ago
Playing Hooky

You caught me playing hooky on this perfect spring day but I had best not tell my boss I came down with fornication flu. But yours is a wonderful play on words. For this disease, the card you want will say "Don't Get Well Soon!"

Patricia

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I like that line

I like the line 'as the milk white shot of a lover’s passion flows' Helps with visual building blocks

Sarah

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
sexual healing <grin

I can only say that I was going to write a poem about sexual healing and after reading this poem, well, it is a much better example of sexual healing than what I was going to scribble <grin I enjoyed your write.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
Wow !!

Sizzle right on through and give me some more !! I love the build up, the imagery and just plane hot lil read. It reads a bit more like a story, I would have trimmed it a bit, but I write'm short, so that's just me probably. Love this !! More Please ~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Whoa......

Ask Sam and Dave sang "Hold ON I'm Cumxx....Coming"

Feel better now don't you? Loved it and danced to it.

sandspike

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Calling Dr. Love

WoW Girlfriend........I think I need to make an appointment with the Dr......SASSY

xcunning_linguistxxcunning_linguistxabout 18 years ago
Shee-yit!

It's so hard to write a sex poem that isn't LAME with a capital everything, but you sure as hell did! Excellent. :D

OSoBuffOSoBuffabout 18 years ago
Fornication flu beats bird flu any day!!!

Now here's a disease that needs no cure---let there be regular outbreaks of fornication flu! Heck--sounds more real than the staging of flu for birds!

SweetDealSweetDealalmost 18 years ago
Fornication Flu!!!

Now I've heard everything. Just hoping they NEVER come up with a pill to cure that disease. In fact, here's hoping for a widespread outbreak! I can't wait to be bedridden! Or is that ridden in the bed?

CaPic267CaPic267almost 18 years ago
To Be Unwell!

With the right doctor making house calls, here is a disease to catch and never recover from. Now to just get that doctor with that special touch! CP

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