by LuciousBi-Writes4U
Now that's a fun way to wake up in the morning - finding your poem on tits, that is. Of course waking up surrounded by tits isn't bad either. As a piece of pure light fun, this is very well done.
made my mouth water and my hands search for something to squeeze <grin, I thought the flow was great and the content made me smile. (~_~)
Really fun to read and hold against ones
heart. That makes it really really good.
I belive there is more fun at the shallow end
of the pool. This has truth and flow and great
visuals of all shapes and sizes. sandspike
that you can march to. It doesn't have to be deep to be enjoyed and at least it doesn't take me an hour to take the poem apart to figure out what is said --- I like it and that's good enough for me!
Your poem was mentioned in the New Poems Review Thread~
thanks for the literary journey~ Art~
and that can't be ALL bad. This shows that some poems can be fun in a silly sorta way. Emily
I simply loved it! It was very cute and made me laugh. It was a bright spot in my day.