All Comments on 'Rain Fantasy'

by hellbound_heart

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
not bad

a good story but you might want to work on staying in the same point of view thru the whole story you kept going from first person to third person and back again and I found it very distracting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
L. I loved it !

Hey L. Love your story, outdoors really turns me on and fucking you in the ass while doing you with a dldo in your pussy at the same time would be awesome..This type of sex is one of my favs to do....!

What the guy in the first comment doesn't realise is that writing the story turns you on so much ,that at times you were inmagining it being done to you and then as you wrote you were imagining what it lookrd like being done to you...hence first to third person...didn't faze me at all..I knew what was happening !

You go girl ! .....

Kisses...

Keith

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