All Comments on 'MudSlide (The Birth of Pleasure)'

Another amazingly original offering, Muse. Menopausal Gaea and little "Pleasure," what a pair! Beautifully written and your personification of them was delightful.

it is amazing, and written in such beautiful words.

Wow! That was really poetic. Your word choices and descriptions were well thought out. Your writing style is lush and colorful! Bravo- Keep up the good work.

You already know how much I like this story, but work this good justifies my redundancy!

nice little write!

good luck in the contest...

~LB~

The Goddess, the seductress, and the resulting ecstasy when the two came together. Very erotic and powerful. Muse, congratulations and good luck to you in the contest.

What most writers would take a paragraph to say, Muse accomplishes with a single word. I'm still trying to understand how words can be strung together so expertly.

This one was sexy and humourous. Truly exceptional.

Hi,

I barely come here but was really happy I did finding this.

You are the Nymph?

Thank You again,

Tom

I can save much time by just voting 5 immediately. Nice story. Thank you.

Good job of bringing the characters to life and of creating a time and place that enhances their encounter.

Rumple

When I started to read it I thought what a joke this is dumb but I kept reading and you changed mymnd the story starts slow but ends well and I ended up being glad I read it Thank you for a job well done

The concept of a menopausal Gaia is intriguing, and the story itself got me hot. The vast difference in the two beings' sizes (I'd been wondering how they'd make it work) reminded me a little of Swift (Gulliver's adventures with the Brobdinangians (sp?)--if only Swift had been a happy person.

... in the contest. A lovely story. One of those ones that I wish I had written some of it. *smiles*

Lizzy

This is why mythology is so fun. I can just imagine this tale being told in the ancient days, with a dramatic voice and inflections to make it an experience.

not my usual cuppa tea, but I lliked how you handled the themes and your writing style.

I'm certain that I couldn't have pulled this one off. It's just wonderful, inventive, lively...so many words I could use. Now, we can call you both a talented writer and a myth maker! Great story!

Excellent read. Beautiful language, sensuous and sexy.

philosophical insight

and social commentary

presented effortlessly

in an erotic capsule

you scale new heights

with each tale you weave

leaving me aesthetically

satiated but wanting more.

I was looking submit a story, similar to a Blob story I read on this site.

I have another "take", on such. My plot/ideas have merit, that's not going away.

This story, reading, just 30 %? of it, shows me... It might want to submit a story, wet sure second gear...

After reading This story complete, and a dozen more out of 20,000?, I may have, a better sense or better sense of what to submit or erect, a blob.