All Comments on 'Caught by Sister'

I thought this was a great start. Can't wait to hear Chapter 2.

Nice sex scene but poorly written... Themes are very, very arousing, but you need to improve on style, and make it last longer.

With such fantasies you have a huge potential... all the best!

well caught - make it a reality

Great start, now we chapter two.

literotica is all about the details. tell me what he was feeling while she fucked his ass, how he thought she felt (not just physically but emotionally). tell me how she licked his ass, licking the rim or sliding her tongue inside. how big was the strapon. what did she look like? was his load big?

Years ago when I was 18 my then-20 y.o. sister caught me masturbating to a gay porno... I was really embarrassed; her reaction was a mixture of shock, confusion, and being really turned on. She was about to take off her clothes when we heard our parents' car crunching up the drive. We quickly got back to normal and as far as I know she's never told anyone about her little brother's "closet tendencies".

Hard to read with that grammar.

that was amazing!! wheres the second??

This is one of my fantasies. Thanks.