All Comments on 'The Haunting of the Third Wheel'
by Wannabeboytoy
- 17 Comments
Anonymousabout 18 years agoI love your stories - original and very sexy. Just wish you'd write more!
Maybe you could spend a little more time on the build up and the conflict between loyalty to the loving wife and inevitable decline into lust....
But either way, more please!
Anonymousabout 18 years agoI'm not usually into the scary stories at all, but this one was awesome. I've read a lot of your other stories and your an awesome writter. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoyeah super hot story... but would have been hotter if you elaborated on the best friend seducing the husband the day after the incident at their house...
big_daddy_kevover 15 years agoYour stories are awesome. i love them and can't stop reding and re-reading them. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousover 15 years agoI always loving your stories about betrayal of the husband on their wife with her closest friend or family member. This is a masterpiece.
I do hope that you will continue in your writing as there is a long long time since your last stories posted.
I do hope that can read something about the wife fight back in this story........
Anonymousover 14 years agoI agree with Anonymous #4 and #6. Please write more stories.
The one thing I wish along with Anonymous #4 is the part when Samantha came over to his house to renact their fucking and the days leading up to where they are back at the house.
Another nice ending is if Erica couldn't find her wedding ring and Jim is fucking a ver pregnant Samantha in their martial bed with Erica's wedding ring on Samantha's hand.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoSo the third wheel can not get pregnant the picture comes alive and he makes her pregnant!
Anonymousover 8 years agoi heard my gfs daughter sayin similar in june in her bedroom ,,,lol shes pregnant now...
Anonymousover 4 years agoI love them cheating on her. I just wish she had gotten pregnant and started lactating
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