All Comments on 'The Crush'

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Now that's a fun piece

Of a thing that never ends

No matter the age

You'll still get a rush

From the crush!

EmJ0385EmJ0385about 18 years ago
Love It!!

I still remember my first crush as though it were yesterday--and the day before that--and the day before that--and I've had lots of crushes--the rush is great but its the after that's a real pain!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
true...

true quick and poignant!

loved it!

brought back a lot of memories!

:)

Nice little write here!

OSoBuffOSoBuffabout 18 years ago
Each one gets better

Each crush gets better and better---tho not as special as the first---til you finally get that final crush and end up with the date of a lifetime!!!

Ninja NookieNinja Nookieabout 18 years ago
That is Right!

I agree. Art told me I would enjoy this poem and he was right. Thank You.

NN

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
Hush my Puppies

I enjoy your charming poetry... hush <grin (~_~)

My face is flush,

My cheeks blush

...from reading... the crush!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
mention

this poem was mentioned in the thread, "New Poems Reviews"

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyabout 18 years ago
Chuckle

This was a cute poem. :) Gave me smiles. :)

MunachiMunachiover 17 years ago
cute poem...

very nice...

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