by XXXZippoXXX
Both Very erotic and thought provoking. It really left me wanting to read more and find out what going on. However, I found the hero's lack of control a little disturbing. Thanks.
Okey!
You have my attention (looking down)! Now I'd like to see where you're going to take this.
I really enjoyed the story even though it was too short. I'm curious about the doctor's last words," Clean him up, measure him and take him to the holding room"; is Jim to be sold as a slave? Makes me want to know what will happen next.
I LOVED YOUR STORY, PLEASE GIVE US MORE CHAPTER AND MAKE IT LONGER!!! YOU'RE DA MAN!