All Comments on 'A Helping Hand Ch. 01'

i truely hope so. maybe linda can discove she too is a gusher....and bi!!!!

Keep up the good work!

This story was so fucking sexy! I think it would be hot to have the sisters have some sort of history togegther... like when they were young, they fooled around or something. It would give the story some depth and make it a little more real.

Good job!

There has got to be more, come on you can't leave us all hanging by that thread!

This is definitely a very hot start to a very long (I hope) story. Kay telling about the first time she gushed, the first time with Jack, her first girl - girl action, etc. The there is always teaching Linda the joys of REAL sex. An instructional BJ, how to lube up and relax for anal,and how two girls can do one guy for hours, and hours, and hours.

And if you don't continue... I will have to all by myself! (Isn't that enough incentive?) ;)

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Well done to say the least.

SEX AT IT'S BEST , OUT IN THE OPEN . MAKE SURE LINDA IS ON THE PILL AND THAT JACK GETS TO SAMPLE HER ASS . THIS COULD BE A GREAT DAISY CHAIN .

You've screwed me up for a good week......

Won't be able to get that vision out of mind.

Where do these fantasies ( or maybe realities ) come from?

Thanks buddy, that was really hot.

Dave

Damn...I can hardly wait until you drop chapter two on us...I absolutely loved this story...Thanks !

Hopefully much more to follow. Now if I could just see straight.

Masterpiece

Prude? Linda? Next moment she's cayght, embarrassed, and then get an invite. Did she run? Hell no she strips for action! Damn hot!

OK, this story shows that HOT SEX is fun. It's supposed to be. But these three turkeys are shallow, immature, superannuated teenage horndogs undeserving of a decently written plotline. And they don't get one. This is not up to your usual standards, dear author.

This elixir of redhot, dripping juicy, newlywed but also sisterly volcanic sex is well written, with solid sexual psychology of horndogs described with passion and humor. Giddyup on to the next chapter!

So exciting, loved this!

Loved the story so horny; definatly will be reading the following chapters!!

omg this was so hot luved it made me stroke till i shot my load mmmmm,ya gotta ahve more

So very horny. Loved your use of language. Cunt and pussy is so ubiquitous but quim.....I have not heard that for some time. Will use that one on the wife tonight!! Anyway the gardening can wait - off to read chapter 2. Thanks very much for your excellent story.

I'm hot just reading this. Heart beating fast - not a good thing after last year's heart attack - but whatever it takes to be a writer is what you've got!

Wow, I loved reading this one! Keep the story going!

Although you do a good job I found the sexual encounters a bit too constant for a couple over the age of, say, 30. People decline at various rates but it is just a bit improbable that this couple, over 45-50. certainly would be quite this energetic.

Thanks for sharing.

WOW

Beloved Author

Words can not express my adoration of your passion and skills, David

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thanks...you have made my afternoon!

Great story, I disagree with Anonymous below, 45-50 can be pretty energetic when we want to be!

I'm nice and stiff now for the next episode.

tfw everyone knows what you mean even though it technically doesn't make sense:

"Neither woman continued to stop ..."