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A Helping Hand Ch. 01

byMany Feathers©
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by Anonymous

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by CuteCouple04/09/06

to be continued?

i truely hope so. maybe linda can discove she too is a gusher....and bi!!!!

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by Anonymous04/09/06

Yes Please!

Keep up the good work!

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by SeXy ReDHeD04/09/06

Please do...

This story was so fucking sexy! I think it would be hot to have the sisters have some sort of history togegther... like when they were young, they fooled around or something. It would give the story some depth and make it a little more real.

Good job!

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by HHubby04/09/06

That was awesome

There has got to be more, come on you can't leave us all hanging by that thread!

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by Anonymous04/09/06

CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER TWO

This is definitely a very hot start to a very long (I hope) story. Kay telling about the first time she gushed, the first time with Jack, her first girl - girl action, etc. The there is always teaching Linda the joys of REAL sex. An instructional BJ, how to lube up and relax for anal,and how two girls can do one guy for hours, and hours, and hours.

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by Anonymous04/10/06

Gracious me... you left me with my fingers soaked!

And if you don't continue... I will have to all by myself! (Isn't that enough incentive?) ;)

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by Anonymous04/10/06

best one I have read in a long time

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Well done to say the least.

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by Anonymous04/10/06

OUT IN THE OPEN

SEX AT IT'S BEST , OUT IN THE OPEN . MAKE SURE LINDA IS ON THE PILL AND THAT JACK GETS TO SAMPLE HER ASS . THIS COULD BE A GREAT DAISY CHAIN .

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by Anonymous04/10/06

Nobel One............

You've screwed me up for a good week......
Won't be able to get that vision out of mind.

Where do these fantasies ( or maybe realities ) come from?


Thanks buddy, that was really hot.
Dave

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by TongueDocAtWork04/10/06

Made me dribble all over my desk...

Damn...I can hardly wait until you drop chapter two on us...I absolutely loved this story...Thanks !

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by Anonymous04/14/06

Definitely Continue...

Hopefully much more to follow. Now if I could just see straight.

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by Anonymous06/29/06

u r the master

Masterpiece

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by David4809/14/06

Egad!

Prude? Linda? Next moment she's cayght, embarrassed, and then get an invite. Did she run? Hell no she strips for action! Damn hot!

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by taxpapabob01/06/09

Jackoff City

OK, this story shows that HOT SEX is fun. It's supposed to be. But these three turkeys are shallow, immature, superannuated teenage horndogs undeserving of a decently written plotline. And they don't get one. This is not up to your usual standards, dear author.

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by taxpapabob11/14/09

Give a Lady a Hand -- and a Cock

This elixir of redhot, dripping juicy, newlywed but also sisterly volcanic sex is well written, with solid sexual psychology of horndogs described with passion and humor. Giddyup on to the next chapter!

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by fitntrim05/10/10

Superb!

So exciting, loved this!

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by Lucky303/27/12

Very hot

Loved the story so horny; definatly will be reading the following chapters!!

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by Anonymous02/25/13

the voyeur

omg this was so hot luved it made me stroke till i shot my load mmmmm,ya gotta ahve more

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by johnb11005/04/13

Well that was good

So very horny. Loved your use of language. Cunt and pussy is so ubiquitous but quim.....I have not heard that for some time. Will use that one on the wife tonight!! Anyway the gardening can wait - off to read chapter 2. Thanks very much for your excellent story.

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by Anonymous12/02/13

I'm hot just reading this. Heart beating fast - not a good thing after last year's heart attack - but whatever it takes to be a writer is what you've got!

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