All Comments on 'You See...'

So very like a conversation I had with a girl friend. Except her responce at the end was to turn around and say how nice it would be if a guy she liked would treat her like that.

OUTCH that hurt!

I liked the pace and the internal dialog so on the button.

Nicely done more please.

I never saw the cameras. Where were they hidden?

I got the feeling where this was going after about half the page, but then I wanted to cruise along with it to savor the punch line. It was worth the wait. 4*