by christian_hm
I love the unspoken, yet inevitable argument of the c-block and remorse of the friend when he realized, its just perfect. It's a really great story hope to be able to read more
You've created a monster - a great set of characters and an interesting story line. The monster is your fan club waiting patiently for part 4. These kids are getting too old to wait much longer to consummate there urges.
JUST GOT HERE TODAY, DISCOVERED YOUR STORY, READ THROUGH ALL THREE CHAPTERS AND NOW WHERE IT'S REALLY STARTING TO HEAT UP, I wonder, WTF? Where are the good parts?? Luscious chick, horny dude, they are ready to jump each other's bones. Please don't leave us like this, inquiring minds want to know, does he go down on her before he gives her the bone, or vice versa?
Hmm Christian, Have you ever finished a story? First, you left the Mermaid floundering, now the farmgirls are abandoned just when we were awaiting seed planting? It's definitely time to bring all your characters and your readers to harvest season. Hope to read more of your stories soon. Thank you.