All Comments on 'Black Veil'

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
black veil

I felt the yearning and passion of your pen in this poem, nice write and deep feelings expressed poeticlly

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
How dark, how sad

DC:

When the scythe of time cuts the brittle thread of life and launches us beyond this mortal coil.

Matters not whether it's us or those we love,

Somethings lost and only time will heal those who're left behind to mourn. Thank You. Ronnie W.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Overwhelmingly sad.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
CHRONDIACS DESPAIR

when they get more than 1 fatal illnesses. TK U MLJ LV NV

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