All Comments on 'Old Friends and New Mistakes'

by adamsro

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ddpmanddpmanabout 18 years ago
Puzzling

I was left puzzled by thius tale. Were did these old ten years past lovers wind up going? She is married to some one else and he is hanging free. I am glad his team won the game but there are too many hanging ends. How did they get to share a trip, game and room?

A fair start for a 1st time writer

LadyFalconLadyFalconabout 18 years ago
That was very erotic.

I loved the build up..explaining the friendship. Sometimes the best sex is between old friends. Thanks for the trip down memory lane.

adamsroadamsroabout 18 years agoAuthor
Where it's going....

I'm thinking there's going to be a second chapter, but it kinda depends how often we see each other :)

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