All Comments on 'Hopelessly Mine'

your poems today were mentioned on the thread New Poems Reviews

Very Good poem! But you left too much out. The sentences were missing vital verbs, adverbs and conjunctives. It left the poem rather hard to understand just what mattered most in this poem. You also wound up using tiny words where full-bodied words would make so much more of the illustrations. It would flow and expand so much of the imagery that was intended.