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All Comments on 'Your Lips'

by LittleTexasWitch

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
lost me

at the second word, which should be your, not you. a simple thing, proofreading, does so much to increase the quality of a poem.

CWCWabout 18 years ago
proofreading is best

what a nice idea for a short poem,,, too bad the words did not match the thoughts.

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