All Comments on '"Slow"'

Hi! I like your poem. I've never seen ellipses and commas used in the way you have and it makes for interesting reading. Have you given thought to using spacing instead to give the pauses whilst reading? It's worth trying. :)

I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

wildsweetone

and lovely. Thank you.

softly in repose - the act of waiting is performed. This poem flows so soft and smooth. Exquisite!