All Comments on 'Losing My Virginity'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hmmm

Usually i dnt like gay male stories but i really liked that 1

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
first time

Mmmm, I never thought about my dad, but the rest of it I have fantasized about. Would love to feel a cock get hard in my mouth, feel and taste him cumming in my mouth. Would also love to feel him fucking me in the ass and cumming deep inside me. I'm about to cum just thinking about it while I'm writing this ! Ooooohhhhhhhhhhh ! Aaaaahhhhh ! Oh , what a load I just shot ! All over my chest and belly. Mmmmmmmmm.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
i want to suck cock

i would really like to suck a dog's and horse's cock. i am a 45 year old male. I would love to suck anyone's cock. how about you? Fuck me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
SUSPENSE SIMMER BUT U JUMBLE THE END

submissive pathetic son taken over by tycoon dad. u started good but jumbled theend . there's no palpable passion ,no well-disposed. the father was so domineering,soobsessive and bully. there's nowrong to be (BI ). OR WHAT U WANT TO BE .NEWSTARTTHANKING U IN ANTICIPATE. ((THES'S THE BEST SITE EVER))

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hehehe

hehehe your a homosexual. btw i know your dad and he has a tiny penis

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
omg

this is the most disturbing thing ive ever read. yall are all fucked up

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wtf

This is so fucked up! Your dad!? Come on man!! When your older your gonna be so fucked up you pedophile bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I loved your story

I wish I had a Father like that. I wish I could make love to you like your Father did. Keep up the nice work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WTF man

this is fiction and all but really why do people like this faggot shit

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Aww

Well I like that story.I want a dad like that. I would like to suck his dick!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WTF IS WRONG WID YOU

dass ur fuckin dad!?!?! u r ganna be fcked up in the head when youre older. why would u write sumthin like this?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Cock

Im fingering my ass right now omg so nice and cant wait to swallow my cum

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
i would do this

i wish my dad was like this i would suck his dick anyday dang im on a boner im jerking off right now

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
shoot this was hot

Dad and son - hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
why call the girl a slut

why is the girl a slut.the father went with his son he is no better.he should had gone with the girl too so the son can do with a girls if he wishes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
what the fucking fuck?

oh my god im scared for life i cant belive i read this. its so damn nasty..i, i cant ...oh my fucking god i think im gonna blow fucking chunks ooopppsss i already did oh no that was just wrong

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fucking disgusting!!!!

Seriously, this is a truly disgusting story my

gay friend asked me too read this and I wanna

throw up so bad! Who the fuck comes up with

nasty disturbing crap like this?! If people actually

enjoy this I hope you don't have kids y'all are sick

fuck all of you! Ugh y'all should all just get caught

and go too prison because people like you shouldn't

be around other people gross disgusting fowl people!

Sick fucks all should he Ashamed that you actually

take pleasue in all this! Omg gross!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Quit Being Pussies

I liked the story, and wish some shit like that had happened to me with my Dad. I always used to think about sucking my old man's big fat cock, and saw it several times, rock hard..if something offends you, go somewhere else on your computer...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Truely amazing

For the people who don't like this, to bad so sad, if it's not for you then don't bloody read it. You don't know if it's real or just taboo, so keep your comments to yourself.

As for me, i love this genre or sex, always has me erosed, shame not enough people are open and free about this interested. Reading it and doing it are completely different.

tracelementtracelementover 13 years ago
I'm so wet right now!

I love the fantasy of sons and fathers getting it on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
So sudden!

I won't comment on the theme, because that's a question of preference, but what the fuck is going on here? Why did the father do this? And how the hell so sudden? No signs, just in medias res?! The son feels he must not let down his old man. Why is this such a strong feeling in him?

The porn here is ok, but isn't the (back)story is, what sets erotic fiction apart from simple porn?

I'm not hoping some kind of complex story, but this felt as if I was only allowed to watch a movie after the first 30 minutes is passed and I had to leave quarter an hour before the ending. And that (even if it's only an erotic movie) pisses me off.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Damn!! Sexy!

This story made me hella hard! You must be pretty lucky being able to suck your daddies cock, seems hot! I someday hope this happens to me and my Dad, I'm 13 and he's 36 but he's still a fuckin stud! Well thanks for the story it makes me hornier than porn. ;) Hit me up on Mbuzzy, my username is IHateYouPlzDie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Fantastic!

Never got a chance to do it, but I still fantasize about sucking my Dads big, fat, brown cock! I watched my Mom suck him one night, and wanted to share it with her! When I watched him fuck her doggy style, I was wishing it were me! Dad is in his 80's now. But, if he could I do him today! Stop being such pussies!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
dads cock

oh it happened to be i was seeing a girl but sucking my dads cock when i tried to fuck her i couldnt get hard unless i thought of my dads cock

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i want some of my dads cum

i dont now how you scuk him off i want to do my dad but dont now how to tell him so i fell pround for you hope you have more good nights

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
this can not be real

even if i m gay,,i will not have sex with my dad neither my dad do..

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
;/

That's really fucked up. I hope your comments are trolls, cause if not you guys need some help. Lots of help.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
a fine story by a talented writer...

...of a father treating his boy like a girl and fucking him up his cute twitching twat. Plenty of boys, not just gay, but straight as can be, are real interested in what dad's got swinging between his hairy legs---his big fat veiny daddy-dick. For a boy it represents his father's power and authority, and he gets down on his knees in front of it to show his deep respect and subordination to his father's masterful prick. A boy kisses and licks his dad's big balls, slurps and sucks on dad's big stiff prick till dad rewards his boy with a mouthful of warm semen, straight from his loaded fatherly balls. Then he flops the boy over, the boy frantically spreads his cheeks with his fingers to show dad the target, and daddy fucks his kid's sweet cunt to within an inch of its life. A dad blowing his balls up his boy's tight asshole is a beautiful thing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I love to suck my father in law's dick. I did it before I married to his daughter.

At first he seemed weird but he told he likes it.

He is jacking off my dick when I am sucking his dick.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
sucking my dad

I first sucked my dadwhen I was 8. He was really long and thick. I must have swallowed a gallon of cum. My mom was watching and masturbating. It was cool! Soon I was fucking mom.she was a good fuck. I used to cum home from school at lunch so I could eat her pussy. I really liked to suck dads cum out of her pussy right after he fucked her. It was yummy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Daddy!!!

At 9 years old, I sucked my Daddy's cock for the first time. I was 11 when my Daddy took my sweet little ass cherry, and I'm still sucking and fucking his cock today at 42!! Daddy has the best cock (11 inches!!!) and I have always loved being his "little girl". Last night, I took off my bra and panties and Daddy followed me to the bathroom. He started fucking my asshole in the bathroom, and then he filled me with cum in the bedroom. I sucked his cock this morning before he went to work. I love it! So please ignore all the haters comments and keep up the Father/son theme!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Shrek

Who the fuck is your dad, shrek

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what the fuck

what the fuck is this shit, scarred for life

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

The fuck gay incest buttrape, ummmmmmm, and the comments

Well fml

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
uuuhhhmmmm

I thought erotic stories are supposed to be arousing? This was so badly coordinated that there was absolutely nothing arousing about it.

Also, try putting warnings in your main work so people can turn away 'cause some are just stupid and don't read tags or pay attention to them.

That said, please work on your writing technique. I honestly don't see how anyone could be aroused by that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
loved it.

I loved this and I am a female I was playing with myself while I read this and came soo hard it left me wanting more......

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Sequel please!!!

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