All Comments on 'Wishing It Was Real'

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billddrummerbillddrummerabout 10 years ago
The Downside of Adultery

What a sad, poignant but ultimately so truthful story!

You had me in tears as they parted.

Knowing the rightness of their coupling would never become real, but only be a wistful memory they would cherish in their own ways forever.

Thank you for a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
So Many Times

I cannot begin to count the times I have dreamed of once again holding that one special girl, of kissing her, of smelling her hair and tasting her skin. Thinking about it

now almost makes me cry. It's been 50 years now, I know it will never happen. I can't think of anything I have ever wanted so badly, but I understand that it will never happen and all I can do is accept that, and carry on. Doesn't make it hurt any less.

Thanks for the story. 5 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

What was that? What did it mean? I mean...huhn?!

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