All Comments on 'Watching Heidi'

Something to sink your teeth into, but not to hard. plus give your tongue a sleigh ride.

It's the second time I have read this and I marvel at its eroticism. It is not crude despite being graphic. The sex oozes out of the pages. Well done. I envy your writing style. Peter Grimm

hey, i love the story but it seems like sections of it are missing? is there a mistake on the website or is this how its supposed to be?