All Comments on 'Jocelyn'

A totally hot story ! I loved it !!! Good writing style, good imagination, good stuff all around !!

The king was a smooth mover in this one. I wonder what he has in store for Jocelyn in the palace, and what the Queen will think - if there is one. Good descriptions. I liked it.

Fuckin hot hot hot

The king definitely was a smooth one in this story! It was a very interesting twist. Perhaps you could elaborate more of the story in another chapter?

TOO SHORT WANTED MORE........

Personally I think it didn't have enough substance. You can't rush sex, love or lust. It's needed to be little more drawn out and if he cared for her in anyway I think he would have fucked her.

They didn't know each other. It seems like she's gonna be his concubine....and 6'9".....a little freaky, no? I'm 5'2", so he's a giant to me and I wouldn't go anywhere near him....like ever....what if he fell...I would die.....