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by LasciviousSanity

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
enjoyed

the last words best..an overall good read though...ty..blue

Vampiric_MirageVampiric_Miragealmost 18 years ago
Beautifully Written

I like the idea that "He reluctantly illuminates the dark" It makes me wonder what he would do if he didn't have to continue his never ending cycle...

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Hi. I'm M but I go by many names. LasciviousSanity around these parts. The only thing useful to know about me is that I love to write. At home, school, in the bathroom, or in a bar. Near or far. Up or down, I write all over town.