by huelust
I love it. I love it. I love it.
You spin a web with words so awesome, I've been captured forever. I'm so glad you continued their story. Thanks so much. Is this a new beginning or the end?
I've been looking for their return and I'm so glad to see you did it. Just don't rush it so much. I savor every minute with them.
Thank you for bringing Luc and Sanaii back and continuing their story. I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to see how things work out for the two of them.
Like eveyone else, THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT STORY. you have to write MORE, soon.
I myself am in an interracial marriage with beautiful kids. Thank you for this steamy story.
While this is a scene you ended it here? I will go looking for more--please
Such a disapointement: I love their story in college and how it ended; I loved the beginning of this new series, and the realistic way their relationship evolved, and now it is back to the same ol' same ol' baby-story-that-will-make-them-be-together-for-real-because-only-pregnancy-can-validate-a-woman...What happened to having a smart female lead who has sex AND is on birth control especially if she decides to go bare with her FWB? Was it to much to asked?? What happened to just make the choice to be together without some baby involved? Such a waste of a good story...
The person under me is a hater. I love your story so far. Great job. Your story, your ideas great work.
"I'll be having your beautiful beige baby"...Really?! How old are they again (that was a rhetorical question). Most importantly, no one says stuff like that. I like the story, just not that line.
I found the last line as a way of bringing levity too a heavy situation something similar to what I'd use
yeah people do talk like that, I'm a black woman married to a white man and we always joke about the potential color of kids we may produce. it's reality and shouldn't be taken seriously.