by huelust
I have read each and every installment thinking that this is my favorite story of all the stories I've read on the site.
Great job on creating such real and likable characters, and a novella that is satisfying in every way. you are a fantastic writer! thank you for sharing Luc and Sanaii with all of us.
Milf26
It was a wonderful series. Thanks for writing it. It was beautiful from beginning to end. Keep up the good work.
I love this story its my favorite of all stories written here. Thank You.
A real story, beautifully told, with characters that develop as time goes by. A black woman, a white man, great romance, great sex. What more could I ask for?
There are very few stories that have great sex and wonderful romance. This series is one of those few. I loved it as a black woman (romance) and as a freak for interracial love (sex). Please keep up the writing. Maybe the next story can have some intrigue.
They are official together! Girl, I read all these chapers in the past hour and I couldn't stop! I was almost worried if they would ever get together, even though Jared sounded VERY hot. Very well done, Huelust and don't keep us waiting for more stories just like that!
Fan always,
~Jazz~
I just wanted to thank you for writing such a wonderful series! Every chapter had me on the edge of my seat! All too often I see interracial stories that just involve sex instead of the possibility of true love. Your series involved romance, love, and incredible sex....can't get any better than that. This is truly the best series I've ever read! Keep them coming!!
Latrice
This series and your previous one are fantastic! Not only were your sex scenes great, but you put together a story that really held my interest!!! I hope you get the chance to publish some material.
This is by far the best series I have read here. I love interracial story lines that are full of human failings, love and ROMANCE. Thank you for not writing a story that was just about scratching a "jungle itch". What a beautiful love story. YOU ROCK!!!
and I was thoroughly impressed with how they evolved as a couple. I was near tears at the end. I hope you write more for literotica. you have a very strong writing talent. the series was very romantic and very real. thanks for sharing.
skipped a few of the chapters, but this is good stuff...you are a talented writer who knows how to truly tell a story. Wild
when im bored i come to this site to read stories...since im often bored, i come here a lot.. in all this time i have not read a story that equals yours..best writter on this site. your characters are dynamic. i felt like i was reading a soap opera..PLEASE keep writting. preferably chapters
I can't believe how good the story was. The whole series was just the bomb. Actually I'm in high school and it's not unusual where I live for all the girls to read erotic sex books with a good story line and plot. Of course our parents don't know. My best friend is even published on this site. I absoulutely loved it! I encourage you to pursue writing an erotic novel. Think about it for real cause if you do I can't wait to read it.
I love the story of Luc and Sanai! From beginnning to end..I love the happy ending!
I stumbled upon your story quite by accident and I have to say this story is simply stunning. One of the most beautiful interacial love story ever written.
Great stuff!!!
I sooooo loved this story. You should so write a novel. I'm 17 and mixed with black and white and it makes me happy to know that there are others who can see beyond someone's skin color and just see beauty. Fareal write a novel....I'd buy it.
I love love love how you weave a story. You let them fall in love with others even though Sanaii was pregnant with Lucs' child but you didn't want them to feel forced into a marriage based on nescessity and you still let Luc stay as Ts' dad and be a father to him without taking away Jared's manhood then even after the tragedy that took Jared away from Sanaii plus you didn't let Sanaii come between Luc and his wife Alisa instead you let there marraige run their inevitable course which lead to divorce through irreconcilable differences then you had them come full circle to the realization that through everything that had happened between them they still love each other.
EXCELLLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED this story!!!! The best I've read on this site.
This writer so very skillfully extolls the joys of interracial sex. It is a pleasure to read such well written material on this subject.
You had me crying and worried when she met Jay...but...he fell for him too and then never was so happy to see her get together with her one true love..thanks for this
I re-read when I'm aching for a good IR romance. Thank you and please write another! You're amazingly talented.
This had all the makings of a good story - well written, great storyline, great dialogue, romantic, and scorchingly hot & sexy. Truly a wonderful story to read. Thank you!
This was absolutely stunning!! I had to read it again once I'd finished it the first time around because I was completely taken aback by how good it was! I love the fact that although the sex was incredibly hot and passionate, the characters actually had 'character'. I found myself holding my breath hoping that things would eventually work out between them. It's almost like reading an adult fairy story! Thank you so much for a great read. I look forward to any more of your writing.
This was a really good read. I just happened upon this story by accident. It kept me spellbound from beginning to end. Race does not matter to me. Love is what matters. Good portrayal of love regardless of race. I hope there is more on these two!!
This was an excellent read. I loved the characters, Luc, Sa, and Jared. You should try and get this published by one of those ebook publishers.
I stumbled accross it,and kept reading it from beginning to end! Just couldn't stop! So well written! BRAVO.Please give us another one.I'm sure you'll get published if you're not already!
This was a really great read. Fantastic job describing the passion between your two main characters. This really blew me away!
I've totally enjoyed this entry...couldn't sleep until I had read it all...
These characters were real, and the story was realistic..
I do believe this story covered a range of emotions ,having a child together and having a bond that continued to grow,they both are now mature and have had other patners(she truly love hers and him, well he tried) , now they can approached this relationship with a sense of maturity, this is shown by him offering marriage and she recognises this and accepts...perhaps another child on the way...
I really enjoyed this story. Loved all of the characters. So happy they found their way back to each other. Wonderfuly written.
AWESOME! Ok, maybe several. You should put this under romance, because that's more the theme than their complexion differences. At least that's what I got out of this story. Fantastic read! Keep up the excellent work, and please post more stories.
I have to admit, that I was extremely pissed off when they started going their separate ways and marrying other people. I guess that's what makes you a writer, and me a reader. Your ability to evoke emotion. Because I so did not like that scene with her eating another mans cum while she was pregnant. However, you did a great job of bringing them back together, even after a tragedy. Which, I totally did not expect. All I can say is. Bravo!
What a wonderful story. It had is highs and low's that sure makes a great read. Loved all the characters of this story. Great job.
I really enjoyed Luc & Sanaii's story.
I must have read it 3-4 times already and still can't get enough.
Huelust, you're a very talented writer.
i love the journey that these two took together. It was beautiful and so damn hot!
Ever time i heard Jared name i feel like crying, he really was a good man...:'(
Amazing Series/stories! It was sooo well written...I didn't want it to end :D
I throughly enjoyed reading this series. Thank you for allowing them to get together in the end.
excellently written, good character depth... real feeling for the characters, which i think is rare. very well done.
I absolutely loved it. No words to express the passion between them; it even made me cry! Very talented writer, you are.
Sanaii had to experience a real love with Jared in order for her and Luc's relationship to grow into more than just friends w/benefits. I think if those two had gotten married just bc she was pregnant it would not have lasted--he would have cheated and she would never known what she was truly worth. Luc matured and deserved to suffer some, but he sure went after his family. As for Alisa, she was second choice and knew it. I kinda wish she had had a little one by Jared and Luc could have help raised her.
So glad you continued their story. No negatives. Except that I could not seem to stop reading, well past the time for me to sleep. Just could not stop! Please write more. Such a great read!
One of the best romance stories i have ever read. Kepp on going man.
I loved this story and the characters were fantastic. Wish they could have added to the family before it end. Wonderful
TWO years later & the kid is speaking in full sentences and hugging her around the waist? He knows how to pronounce Hawaii?! Get a fucking clue!
She was five months pregnant when you ended the last chapter, that would make the kid about 14 months old, ya idiot!
My gawd!
Like really... I understand fantasy but get real!
started out a little muddled, but everything (characters, dialouge, plot, writing) got better and turned out to be a sexy sweet HEA! thanks for the great read!!
Clearly you lack reading comprehension skills or perhaps you can't follow a clearly laid out timeline. She met Jared when she was 5 months pregnant, they were married 8 months later. Jared died 6 years later. Luc got divorced, Luc came after Sanaii. All these things happened over YEARS, ya numbnuts. You expect the kid to still be saying "googoo gaga" after all that time? Why am I even entertaining this troll!? Jeesh!
I have to say ever since I stumbled upon this page I have read some life effecting stories and a lot of clit effecting stories.... loved both stories, and I think you did a great job......you captured me, and really had me nose deep and experiencing feelings a lot of authors are not able to do.....there's just telling a story, there's telling a great story, and there's telling a great story while initiating different feelings through out your readers.....and that's you.....I don't normally leave comments, except when some dumb ass hole's comment is so fucking stupid you cant help but respond.....remember as a great anything you will always have haters.....but also congratulators......and I huelust am congratulating you on 2 stories well written......to Anonymous 5/12/13 learn to add and read because he clearly stated years had went by......grow up or better yet this is an adult website comment back when you mature.....GOOD LUCK huelust
Really good story, one of the best I have read so far here. Would have loved more backstory for Sanai, maybe some other friends than Luc, to flesh out her character. It was more of a story about Luc's maturity; but it was well written, without dragging unnecessarily with back and forth bullshit or emotional turmoil, angst, etc. I loved how they spoke honestly about their feelings, even during the FWB part. Was a bit surprised by the pregancy bit, fearing it might ruin the story but it was very well developed : that is not what made them be together again, it created a bond but they had to, Luc had to grow and mature and choose to be in this relationship. Even the "triangle" was well written, and I always HATE triangle story ! ! ;) I liked the fact that Sanai and Jared loved each other, and had a happy family and that Sanai wasn't stupidely "torn" (expect for that time when Luc checked her out, bu then the way she reacted to Jared's vulnerability was just great!! Although Jared's death was a bit of an easy copout...) Good job and thanks Huelust
Ughhh i hate you so much for writing this because now I've read it and got so wrapped up I didn't want it to end... loved Jared and Lucas
That was great, got misty when Jared came into the picture love Luc and Sa together but then I cried when he died. Thank you so much for sharing it was hot and heart warming
You have created two characters in Sanaii and Luc that I rooted for from the very beginning. I am so thrilled that you shared this sfory.
Well then you sure know how to pull at all of my emotions. I love the the story.keep doing wat your doing., your writing is wonderful.
But Holy fuck if this isn't the best one I've ever read.
Dude I was crying through at least 4 or 5 of the chapters. This was great. Mother fucking 10/10 it was beautiful. Such gret. Much butiful. Wow.
I know you wrote this almost like a while ago. However, I just stumbled upon it and i literally could not get enough. You wrote something magical here. I am so happy I found this. Like I felt every emotion possible. Happiness, sadness, anger, and contentment at the ending. I am satisfied. . . for now. lol but I know I am going to be looking for more of Luc and Sa'. This story was a perfect 10/10 you are the SHIT for real.
It's been awhile since you initially wrote this but, it was spectacular. Thank you for sharing
This was everything!! This series was everything!! How the hell did I miss this story?!?! I am in total awe! I have all the feels right now. You made me laugh, cry and horny, damn!! Behind the Mask to their after story, amazing. Great job!!
Oh my gawd!! This is absolutely the best fic on this site. I can’t understand why your fic isn’t first in the Hall of Fame. Your writing was brilliant. I was on an emotional and sensual rollercoaster the with every chapter. Behind the Mask, beautifully done and then following up with realistic characters, paced perfectly, amazing!! Thank you!! Please tell me you’re now a published author... this story should be published. Again, amazing, job well done!
I seriously read this once a month. It is so wonderfully written and realistic!! It should be a movie. It's THAT good!
Re read 📖 and its as if I'm falling in love with the characters for the first time.
Both of these from beginning to end I just love them!!! I have to reread each time.