by Night-Wolf
This was worse than ripping out the last chapter of a paperback. Looking forward to your next submissions as there must be a lot more to come, keep up the good work.
I was hooked from the first story - now left dangling waiting for more - almost literal BDSM.
Please continue with this story, it is amazing very visual and intense. I cant wait to read on.
Cliff hangers that is. Cliff hangers are evil. Please, PLEASE, submit the next parts.
Great story! This could be a great book. I want MORE. Really good stuff.
This is a neat story line and crossing the lines of western and mind control, has a very intreging reach.
loving the story. surprised your not more well known. can't wait to read the next chapter. 5 stars
Why have you not continued your story line. When it just starts to get interesting you quit.
Please continue the story, i love the wild west, and this story is just starting to get good.
When are you, going to finish this story? I really cannot believe, you are going to waste this great story.
Please, I enjoyed what you have writen so far. I feel like I have picked up a good book that someone has torn out all the last pages.
I am sorry that Night-Wolf either forgot how to write or passed on to a better world. I would so much liked to have been able to readthe rest of this sory,
Where is the rest of this intriguing story? I feel left out in the cold...
This is one of my problems with "authors" on this site. They write a chapter or two and then just stop... Don't submit unless you've written the entire story. That way you don't leave readers in a lurch.
I know it’s been awhile but you have a gift.
Entertain your readers and continue your tale.
Why did you stop this story in the middle of the story line?
When are you going to continue it?