All Comments on 'Nikki and her Brother'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
WOW!!!

Loving this story. VERY Hot and realistic and I'm looking forward to reading MORE about Nikki, Ed and Diane.

Keep it up!

kruszerkruszeralmost 18 years ago
Great

Great story...as said before, very realistic...i hope you continue with this one...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I hope you continue

Please please Continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Super!

Excellent story! Well written and very hot!

OVERLANDOVERLANDalmost 18 years ago
VEREEE INTENSE!

I loved every word and action. The story evolved with credibility and pace. It made you want to know how it was all going to end. If indeed this is the end I would like to have seen it get closer to the inevitable. The tale is incredibly sexy and maybe, just maybe, it will be difficult to provide enough diverse scenes before Ed finally slides his erect hard cock into Nikki's wet pussy? This is only the second '5' I have ever given.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
PLEASE CONTINE!!!!!!! MORE

HOT AS HELL!!!!! I LOVED IT PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Gulp!

Easily one of the best, sexiest, hottest, smartest, stories on this site. I'm dying to find out more about you - whether you're like the nikki on your story. are you skinny with small tits? Do you squirt? Do you play with your brother or just fantasize about it? In any case, bravo!!

billys68ssbillys68ssalmost 18 years ago
WOW

Another awesome story. I cant wait to read the rest...

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Totally Agree

i agree with everything that everybody has said. it is so rare to find a really detailed story that keeps your attention. please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
WOW

Another AWSOME story from an awsome lady. I love your work.

kinky_profkinky_profalmost 18 years ago
Fantastic!

Based on the strength of this story alone, I have added you to my favorites list.

The story avoided all the hackneyed story elements. The characters behaved believably and likeably. And the writing was <u>hot</u>!

kinky_profkinky_profalmost 18 years ago
Fantastic!

Based on the strength of this story alone, I have added you to my favorites list.

The story avoided all the hackneyed story elements. The characters behaved believably and likeably. And the writing was <b>hot</b>!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
WOW

I dont usally like stories taht are this long but I must say you are NOW BOOKMARKED and I will be reading more and more of your tales

bad_little_bearbad_little_bearalmost 18 years ago
Just when you thought it couldnt get better...

I was hooked from past series and almost came just from getting the email anouncing the new posting. Nikki is definitely the queen in my book. Thanks so much for great daydreams and wet shorts.

rayfromjerseyrayfromjerseyalmost 18 years ago
Outstanding!!!

What a story!! Where do they go from here?? Will Nikki ever fuck her brother? Will they have a threesome. Are the parents as horny as their kids and Diane. Don't keep us waiting too long.....please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
wank material

Absolutely fantastic story, had me hooked from the first few lines!!! No reason to continue the story as there is enough questions there for us to use our imagination!!!

ClevelandRocks18ClevelandRocks18almost 18 years ago
Oh so very HOT!

Please continue as these characters have tons of potential. But stay away from the parents--maybe add another sibling who is away at uni?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Excellent!!

This, is by far the best story i've had the chance to read thus far, for a long while i failed to find anything worth while, when I came across this piece I was skeptical, untill i read the first page, then i was hooked, the level of detail you put into this story was fantastic. I eagerly await any continuation of this story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Brilliant

This was the first story I ever read on this site and it still the best by far. Please continue it, I would love to see Niki and her brother get together. But no parents please.

starman2718starman2718over 17 years ago
Nikki and her Brother

Don't stop here. I would like to see Nikki and Diane get more involved. Also, a threeseome would really be great. Why not have both girls do Ed as a Christmas present? I hope you continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I AM SOoooo Wet!!!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
FANTASTIC

SIMPLY FANTASTIC.NO FURTHER COMMENTS

David48David48over 17 years ago
bad sis

Well we all know where this will end-up (I hope I hope!). This is one sizzling threesome. Parents leave kids home alone entirely too much...fortunately. Oooooh I'm soooo bad...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I enjoyed it

It is a very 'interesting' read. The rapid transformation, from the innocent Nikki to an adventure seeking diva, is very appealing to me. In addition, the slow build up of action, from the beginning to the climax at the end, is actually quite beleivable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Ohhhhhh NIKKI!

This is tooo hoooot. You need to continue this threesome.

Pleeeeeeease.

Rjay

mark_8675309mark_8675309over 16 years ago
great story!

loved this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
good

good story but would have been better if you had left the spanking out these things usually get out of hand and someone gets hurt or mad and tells a parent or other authoritiesand they end up hating each other forever

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 15 years ago
Loved it!

I can't add much to the superlatives that have already been applied to this story in other comments. But I enjoyed it so much I just had to say so publicly. Well done!

taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 14 years ago
Careless Teenage Sexperiments

The sex is pretty hot, but thoughtless and badly planned. All three talk about the various issues, but then make ill-founded, selfish decisions anyway. They constantly lie to each other. They get their rocks off, and that's the entire story content.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 13 years ago
Wow

this is very well written and crazy hot thanks so much cant wait to read the rest.

blueyedbobblueyedbobalmost 13 years ago
awakening desire!

loved this story about nikki learning about sex,,,very realistic in that there is confusion and what to do and to whom and with what,,,looking forward to more,,no matter where it goes i am confident i will enjoy!! thank you so much for making my fantasies take me over!! this was such a hot read,,,,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I thought your story was fantastic- it was really well written and very hot. It took me several times before I managed to read it all! Thank you very much. Sam x

sammy_kindsammy_kindabout 12 years ago

I loved this story.. :) I really like how you went between the two stories between Ed and Diane- it made it flow so well. I'm really looking forward to reading your other stories now. Sam

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Excellent

A long story but excellent. Spent my time hard as I was reading

hejohejoover 11 years ago
Not enough stars

I need at least five more to give your story it's true rating. Yours is above all the rest in how a story should be written.

Have you written other stories that aren't posted here? If so let me know where so I can read them.

debaucherdebaucherover 10 years ago
Liked it very much

Absolutely beautiful. It's a five!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Another amazing story

Second story I've read by you and oh my gosh so amazing! You're such a great writer. Still wish I was Nikki :-p

JackM30ffJackM30ffover 9 years ago
5 Stars!

I was scrolling down with my thumb on my phones touch screen when the area under my thumb that I touched to scroll happend to be the rating stars and it registered a two star rating and it won't let me change it. That's not fair because I really wanted to give it 5 stars.

I'm not really much of a fan of the roll playing but I love the whole sister and her best friend enjoying each other and sharing her older brother. Totally hot!

thebug37thebug37about 8 years ago
WACK - WACK - WACK - WACK - WACK Stars

A spanking good story - even finger licking good. Those two school girls got wacked and they seemed to enjoy the results of being bad - or perhaps I should say, good at being bad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Superb

I love the way you introduced each new element of the story, it was so believable and so, so horny. I sincerely hope that you take this story to the conclusion I am hoping for which will be a threesome with Nikki, Ed and Di.

I am looking forward with great anticipation for the second part and then to read your other posts. You are now number 1 on my list of favourite authors.

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
Awesome..Best story I have read

Had me hard the entire time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Freaking Awesome !

I was hard through the whole story. Thank you Nikki - you are a master erotic writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story!

What a great story and you built it up so well! I am looking forward to the next adventure!

JSipesJSipesabout 6 years ago
More

Ed is now obligated to go home and reward his sister’s performance by squirting a load of his sperm down her throat. She should get to taste it first hand from his cock now that she’s had a second hand taste from Di’s kiss.

sgtbryan86sgtbryan86about 6 years ago
Wow

Fantastic story! Damn, was it HOT!

thicccgirlthicccgirlalmost 6 years ago
VERY EROTIC

The whole story from start to finish left me on the edge of my seat. It wasn't simply one of those "fuck em and go" type stories but the sexual relationship between the two gradually got more intense. I cant wait to read more and see how far they are both willing to go.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A little cute

story's a little cute with the school uniforms and sister being a virgin needing her lessons but it is hot. Work on your proofreading. There's some errors in here like name consistency with Diane

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sizzling

I like Nikki's adventurousness, borderline believable, with a touch of the fansasy realm.

grampaaloisiusgrampaaloisiusalmost 4 years ago

The third story of you I read and I’m so happy that I found your account here on Literotica.

So geil, herzlichen Dank fĂĽr diese wirklich erregende Geschichte.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent! Very hot indeed!

There's only one other thing I was hoping for. I wanted her to fuck her brother. 'Hope that happens in the next episode.

muskyboymuskyboyalmost 3 years ago

3/5 Would have been 5/5 if anybody had fucked anybody!!!

OldUncleAlOldUncleAlover 2 years ago

Really hot! And I like the way each encounter gets a bit bolder. Too many have almost all the combinations/ activities right away. Then what is there to make me click on chapter two and yell at my computer:”load faster, dammit! This is really hot!” Lol

Seriously, you are really doing a great job….or you did a great job, as I believe this is an older story. I sure hope you write some more sibling stories, as there are some family combinations that I am not at all into. That doesn’t make them wrong, and I judge no man nor woman. Each to their own.

Thank you for your efforts, they are absolutely entertaining and fun to read!

Old Uncle Al

shyspudshyspudover 2 years ago

as is most of your stories, this is sublime Nikki and you make me incredibly horny. Makes me wish i had a sister! Thank you so much, cannot wait to read chapter two

ECTLarryECTLarryalmost 2 years ago

Amazing! Please keep writing!

CristoforoColomboCristoforoColomboabout 1 year ago

You really know how to write cracking good stories and turn up the heat. Makes me wish you were my sister, but then, I won't be the only one thinking that! It's a brilliant touch, putting yourself into the stories as a character; really makes them come alive and as hot as it's possible to get.

SVKsrPhotoSVKsrPhoto11 months ago

Great story, great writing!!! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great story so hot you made it come alive

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

excellent, more please

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