All Comments on 'What Is Going On Up There?'

Read down to the part about hubby wanting his wife to fuck a black man. That's prejudiced as crap. That's making a sex object rather than a human out of black men.

a wimp hubby and a interacial story

Good story, good writing, and it's too bad the mouth breathing bunch gets to write comments or vote, for that matter. I suspect in at least some cases those writers have been there and had that done to their willing wives and still haven't come to grips with that reality. They probably do have a grip on a body part though.

Write more, some of us really enjoy these stories (hey negative critics, it IS a story after all).

looking forward to part 2 ..i hope ...the telling of what happened

Wimpy husband, whore wife, would serve them both if her new man turned out to me a homicidal maniac, kills her after he finishes with her, and leaves the poor wimpy husband crying over her dead body. Of course, he is so shitty, he'd probably eat the cunt of the dead corpse.

then crappy points for this so called story.

very wrong start to subjecting a white man to this kind of shit ...so fucking what mine is 6 soft but it grows to 11 ...ill bet theirs at 8 soft is still 8 hard ... white men are way more considerate lovers and better pussy eaters that blacks any way ...has something to do with the fact that most blacks cant get past the basest instincts ...the monkey left in them i guess

disgusting, but well enough written. How a man could hate himself so much is a mystery.

you suck shit on cock

is erotic and arousing to a semi-normal person? I think not! What you evidence is the worst and lowest type of man. A wimp who self cuckolds himself by pimping out his wife whore and wants to watch a big cock.

The scores and comments will reflect that your sick subhuman weakness and demeaning of men only appeals to the few jaded numb sicko's like yourself who need pathetic humiliation to erect enough to jackoff. Little else excites them as they are otherwise jadedly dulled senseless by prior excesses that soon won't be enough again.

A misinterpretation by you of what is arousing to most readers or a stated subhuman need to express what excites you???

Not a good start but 1 story is not a trend is it. So, either get some help, go away or become more lifelike in your excitements. Failing either, put it in Fetish with Pissing and the other subhuman acts that the jaded few need.

Not without some talent but little sick one please give some thought to the path you choose to walk down as some never elevate self respect.

lowest of all men.it's love and honor,and not pimp her out as a whore.

or at least interracial.

Not worth reading.

I liked the way you put the story together writing on the computer. I hope you ignore the idiots and continue to write interracial stories. The more that are written the easier it will be to overcome the racist morons.

I enjoyed the story, wished there was more of it ! Are you going to write again? I hope so. I would have liked to hear her telling him about it.

that sought this story out, and read it. My wife, Joyce, and I have a black friend that she fucks a couple times every month. I don't watch or want to hear all the details. I am happy that they enjoy the sex without any hang-ups.

You will like this story. It's okay if that's what you like. Not sure I would let a Blackman fuck my wife two or three times a month. I would seriuosly question my values in life. Firstly and top of that list would be "Why am I married at all?" Second would be "Why aren't I good enough for my wife?" Thirdly "Why a blackman?"

Look less than 1% of the male population are cuckolds. Why are you writing stories for such a small audience.

STORY !!!! Does nobody understand? These are 99.55% all FICTION, meaning NOT true. Just a figment of the author's imagination !!! If anyone here had ever visited a real library they could, maybe relate to the class of fictional material, and non-fiction ( REAL, TRUE ) stories, ideas, etc.

Great story, and would love a continuation. Lots of build up, and lots to work with. Don't let the gutless anon posters below influence you. First, hot-wife and husbands sharing their wives is one of the largest fantasy segments out there. This gutless little wannabes will try to push you down, in actuality they just rub their little dicklets off to your story, then regret it after. From a real man's perspective, who's wife has done the hotwife thing in the real, your story is great, and look forward to the next chapter!