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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
lots

of warm thoughts in this tribute...she is a lucky lady...Mum's can be full of memories for sure...only mine aren't so lucky...you are blessed...sighs.blue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Lovely

I enjoyed reading this, but felt that the last stanza sounded a little awkward when I read it. Do a little re-jigging and you will have a really fine piece.

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