All Comments on 'Yu Ling in Her Hostel Room Ch. 02'

Hi Orange Blossom

Chp 2 was great. I hope you are looking to explore this relationship in further chapters. As I spend a lot of time in Singapore I suspect this may be based on real life. The greater freedom in the US obviously suits you.

I would suggest you take more time expanding on the sexual tension between Yu ling and her partner....the desires that are coursing through her body.

Also write only fromYu Ling's view.

Ciao B

It was a long, but worthwhile wait for # 2, but please, don't make us wait for so long before # 3.

Hot exciting sizzling story! But hoped for an even more sizzling hot threesome sex involving one of the guys above in Chp3.